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Carolin Emily ´Dragoncat´ Southern

"The Darkness Rising" by Carolin Emily ´Dragoncat´ Southern

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Another poem. This one is about armagedon and demon armies destroying the world. I was in an utterly foul mood and took my anger out by writing something dark...
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Darkness Rising

Darkness in the shadows lie

Beyond the earth, beyond the sky

Festering now and wounding then

Even beyond the realms of mortal men

Blood does drip and skin does peel

Time runs on but the wound won’t heal

The wheel of life keeps ever turning

Hell fires in mortal minds are burning

Where there was a forest great

Sentinel trees there are of late

Choking fumes hang thick in the skies

Oh the choking earth, it gasps then dies-

All mortal wishes and desires

They are born from the bright hell fires

There is no great in selfishness

Those men that seek sleep shall never rest

There are few and few there are

Who are different by very far

For those who seek they will not find

Death will creep into their mortal mind

Of the joy of mother Earth

There was the darkling humans birth;

They build up high the towers of death

With which they wish to steal the earth’s breath

Let the chains of dark smoke break

And let the demons scream and quake

From deathly shackles go break free

From your self created tyranny

But no! Your willing mind stays

You will not leave those evil ways

This is how the darkness rises

Fire eyes on black devices

Ten thousand times the drums roll

To demon armies surrender your soul.

And come immortals join the fight

Ye will be the victors oh queens of light

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22 Jun 2003:-) Emily Faerber
That is really good. It rhymes and everything! 2 Nice and dark, me likes!

15 Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: "  I like writing rhyming poetry, it, in my opinion, flows better and allows for more tools of emphasis on certain points."
25 Jul 2003:-) Leigh *Shwin* Erickson
*counts syllables* yes... you did mis count a few times... Hi! I'm just your friendly (well, i hope I am!) neighbouring writer (erickson... to your left) and decided it would be good to drop by and visit... and by the looks of it *does a happy dance* I sure am glad I am!!! This is beautiful! *is in love with dark poetry* besides... you love a lot of the same authors I do... and if I may ask, who is Robin Jarvis? Someone left a comment on my page about my work and tied Robin Jarvis into it you see... yes... Ok! You have more stuff that I can read! yay!

1 Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: "  Thankyou. I like both works in your library. I only have the dark poems up here because my cheery ones are out of genre. Robin Jarvis is an author aimed towards teen audiences who wrote the Deptford books about almost anthro mice and rodents who are very civilised. The Deptford stories are a bit dark, and almost scary, with demonic cats and canabalistic rats. He also wrote the Whitby Withches, which I have not read. ~§~ Carolin ~§~ "
26 Aug 200445 Melissa
Yet another awesome peice of poetry...OH I LOVE POETRY!! and yeah, i agree, dark poems, i find them easier to write than happy ones12
im sorry if i wander to me in my odd comments12
i must tell you 12 is my trademark12 i use it always this too1 its so adorable, but there i go again back to me...sorry really.
I love the style of writing yet again....I'm off to read more, wouldn't be surprised if i finish the library today1212
ttfn
~melissa~

1 Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: "Thankyou. I will have new work up in about a week, so check up then. In about three or so weeks I will update again with alot of Darkwings. I will put the new versions of my chapters up. The good versions.-|- Carolin -|-"
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'The Darkness Rising':
 • Created by: :-) Carolin Emily ´Dragoncat´ Southern
 • Copyright: ©Carolin Emily ´Dragoncat´ Southern. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Daemons, Demons, Armagedon, Death, End, Of, The, World, Destruction, Hell, Darkness, Rising, Fire, Eyes, On, Black, Devices
 • Categories: Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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