| 21 Jun 2003 |  Kate 'The Pirate' Riley |  Loading...Aww! I like dragons and now there's only one?? I love the kind of sombre/magical theme and rhythm there is to this poem and I expecially like the use of winter in the poem. It always symbolises the end or the beginning I think so good use of symbolism.  Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: " Thankyou for commenting. Here, have a first comment cookie! *gives you a cookie* I don't know how many, or how few dragons there really are... if dragons exist, which they may or may not do. symbolism in poetry, it gives the poems more depth and allows the writer to convey more without writing reams and reams and reams of poetry. ~§~ Carolin ~§~" | |
| 26 Jun 2003 |  Debra Lynn Turpin | Loading... Very nicely done. I'm just a tad partial to dragons, so I read this first. It has a nice flow to it and rhymes well. I got a nice visual with this. I enjoyed this very much. Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: " Thankyou for commentin! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.~§~ Carolin ~§~" | |
| 1 Jul 2003 |  Elizabeth Fitzgerald | Loading... Well I'm impressed. A bit somber for my liking, but this definitely has some great imagery. I thought it tended to be quite evocative. I felt a little bit frightened of the fierce dragon at first, but by the end felt quite sorry for him. A fantastic job and definitely a worthy addition to your collection Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: " Thankyou for commenting. I am happy that you liked poem. They do tend to be a bit on the depressing and/or somber side. They are getting cheerier though! ~§~ Carolin ~§~" | |
| 25 Jul 2003 |  Leigh *Shwin* Erickson | Loading... Wow!! Your rhyming was almost not seen! It was so not forced it was scary! It was like you wrote it not meaning for it to rhyme but it just... did... awesome! I loved it! Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: " I rewrote this somany times, trying to subtly embed the rhymes rqther than make them glaringly obvious. I am glad it payed off. I have some more poems coming soon, one about phoenixes and one about animagi." | |
| 17 Aug 2003 |  Domida | Loading... It is true after reading all previous comments you have a superb collection of poems here and the only repproach is that they are all somber and filled with sadness. Now what about writing amusing things on the humouristic side for a change?  Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: " Dear Mum, I am, unfortunately, not that good at writing cheerful poems, but when I write a good one it will go up here, that I can promise." | |
| 26 Aug 2004 | Melissa | Loading... Awesome awesome awesome, no other words for it  . I think I'll wander off toward the story now and ask Leigh (erickson) when I'm finished what you have...more HAS to come good work...you like dragons huh?  Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: "More is most definately coming. I hopefully have not just more Darkwings 2: Saviour coming, but more poemsessss. Preciousssss poemssssss. Sorry about that.. an attack of Gollumitis." | |
| 16 Sep 2004 | Svenni | Loading... Well done im not really into this kind of stuff but it is amazing..Well done Carolin Emily 'Dragoncat' Southern replies: "Thanks Svenni, see you in school. ~#~Carolin~#~" | |
| 22 Jan 2005 | Domida | Loading... Anyway, I like this Dragon. But I am still waiting for a more joyous poem, something which will make me laugh.PLEASE. | |
| 28 May 2005 | Carsis | Loading... yes my name is carsis and fyi I'M A DRAGON!!!!!!!!!
so (poking you with clawed hand) what do you think of THAT?
hugh? (more poking) so...... so .... so THERE!!!!!! | |
| 9 Feb 2007 | Sage | Loading... Dear author, I read your story of the last dragon and I must say that it turly touched me. As a dragon lover I seek to find splendid poems and stories and I think yours will be added to my list of favorites. Your poem was grand and with your words you made the story seem real, my heart went out to that dragon. But I pray that it not be the last dragon of this world. | |
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