"Bitter goodbye" by Ricardo castillo

Wow, it must have been a long class as well for you to get so much detail. I like the pic a lot. It reminds me of the movie First Knight with Sean Connery and Richard Gear. After Lancelot goes and saves Lady Guineviere and they are in the woods and they are just about to kiss but then King Arthur's army is heard in the distance. Thats what I get from it, very medevil.

She is very small, and I think the proportions of the arm might be off, there seems to be something wrong there. Other than that, this picture is absolutely wonderful. I really appreciate the detail of the background and the costumes. Alot of artists here don't take the time for that. (I am one of them, but I am trying to change Good job.

Of course she looks small! She's standing next to a hulking warrior. YOU'D look small. The whole scene is marvelous. backround, detail. But her hairline is much too low, it appears she has no forehead. The face needs attention, she has no cheekbones, the eye cavities (appetizing) are too narrow, it looks mask-like. Her mouth is a little off, needs shading around it so it doesn't look "peel and apply here", ja? And unless she's pregnant and he's also 'holding' the baby, tell his to put his hands elsewhere! Overall, it is still very well done.

This is a really nice picture. However, there's something funny about the hands. They seem kinda off odd, stiff and a bit to small. Considering you did this in class it seems really cool. The hand thing is just something to work on.

Very nice! I do a lot of classroom doodles, so my teachers all love me...^_^ Very good work!

Very emotional picture.
Yes she is small, but her proportions are good, and for the man too. He is just a big man
This makes her look frail and fragile, and he seems to be protecting her. I like this picture a lot.

Bueno, aprimera vista creo que el dibujo impresiona,la "mancha inicial". En realidad es un buen dibujo, pero creo que no expresa bajo un mismo lenguaje el contraste de luz-sombra (me refiero a que el pelo y las caras de los personajes estan muy oscuras con lo que tu atención se centra en ellos, y no en el resto del dibujo), los personajes permanecen en una postura muy hierática y las proporciones no acaban de convencerme. Pero un detalle que me gusta mucho es la impresion que causa verla a ella junto a él, muy pequeña y delicada. El fondo bastante bien, megusta el efecto de "claridad",debido al aire intermedio, aunque yo, para resaltar a los personajes hubiera optado por oscurecerlo (pero eso es cuestión de gustos). Pero sin caer en la contraposición de lenguajes de luz-sombra.

You did this in class?? Wowsers!!!

Is that a bird nest on one of the trees? Heh. I like the trees.

Yup, her arm is to short. elbow should come closer to waist length. They do look lovely together.