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"In Those Nights" by Chelsea Castonguay

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A poem...sort of one of a pair.
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In Those Nights

 

And in those nights

he was strong and

his skin cool to her touch.

 

In those times of darkness

when the stars had failed to shine

He was there for her, using his

 

spells to heal her, and his calming

words to set things right within her mind

When she herself could hardly say a thing

to comfort him

 

And she wondered how long

his strength could last

when it was cruelly being

 

ripped away from within.

The magick he had embraced

Was killing him slowly

 

And she was angry

She wondered how she would

last, a fragile creature against

 

the evils in the world, for she knew

it would no be long before she was

alone, and he would be gone

 

to a plane she could not reach

A plane she doubted even existed

But his shining eyes told her he believed

 

And when he held her to him in the suffocating

darkness, she listened to the beating of his heart

and waited for it to stop.

 

C. Castonguay

 

←- My Goddess | Lancelot -→

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17 Jun 2004:-) Rosie Sanderson
I like the enjambment (Shush I can't spell!) between stanzas, that made it really smooth and flowing (Almost as if the narrator is just writing her thoughts as they come to her, caught up in the emotion of the moment ~ Sorry, been doing English exams all week!). Really nice poem! You say it's one of a pair....?

:-) Chelsea Castonguay replies: "Yeah in a way it reminds me of My Goddess"
21 Jun 2004:-) Tarafae0
..."she listened to the beating of his heart
and waited for it to stop."

Ah, that was my favorite part. I quite enjoy all of your writing. If I had time I'd comment on them all.
I love your style of writing; ah, I've lost the words to say.

1 Chelsea Castonguay replies: "Thank you, that's very nice. I'm glad you enjoy my works."
1 Jun 2005:-) Diana N Carter
Yay! I've just read this one and "you my lord". Your writing is great, the plots are so intriguing. I can tell you are a romantic at heart!

44 Chelsea Castonguay replies: "haha, sorry I missed your comment for some reason! It's true, I'm a romantic at heart, but don't tell anyone! Don't want them thinking I'm a softie!"
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'In Those Nights':
 • Created by: :-) Chelsea Castonguay
 • Copyright: ©Chelsea Castonguay. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Caster, Death, Depair, Doom, Emotion, Magic, Magick, Powers, Sadness, Sorcerer, Spell, Warlock
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers...
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