| 10 Dec 2005 |  Larry N. Morris |  Loading...welcome to Elfwood! Get alot of feed-back on your work from other writers. Just visit others and leave helpful comments on their work. Most of them will return the visit. Good cess and good writing.  Katherine Bates replies: "Thanks for the advice" | |
| 10 Dec 2005 |  Aletheia Preston | Loading... Hiya! * First comment dance I'm a new writer too!! although I haven't put anything up yet...You're a really good writer!! Katherine Bates replies: "Thanks for your comment, I'll have to look at your stuff when you puplish, its always nice to see other peoples work." | |
| 11 Dec 2005 |  Vicki Leady | Loading... You have some very interesting ideas here. Your style needs a bit of polish though. For instance, repetition=bad. There's a lot of different ways to say the same thing and it makes your work sound a lot smoother instead of using the same words you already have. You also have a few punctuation issues but nothing a little self proof reading wouldn't cure. Try reading it out loud and see if it would be something you would *say*.
Anyway, that's my bit of advice. Keep it up, I eagerly await the next chapter of "The Last of the Gold." ^_^ | |
| 12 Dec 2005 |  Jacqueline 'Jac' Tanner | Loading... Hey there and welcome to the woods. I read both of your lovely stories and left critiques on the Last of the Gold. I enjoyed the story and i hope i didn's sound harsh (about the third of fourth time i said that... but i am meaning to help lol) You have brillaint unique ideas at your disposal! I await more work from you soon! | |
| 1 Jan 2006 |  Linda M. Billson | Loading... Heya! Just checking in to see if you had any new stuff....*waiting, waiting, impatiently waiting...* | |
| 26 Oct 2007 |  Marika Viklund | Loading... Thank you for the Tag! ^^ | |
| 24 Nov 2007 |  Kiri eaton | Loading... great writing, i hope mine is a good to read, but it's probably not, I'll have to wait until it gets published on the site to find out. Well, I hope you continue with your stories, I've only read willow so far, but it's great! Katherine Bates replies: "Thanks so much for the tag, I'll make a note to read yours as soon as you publish it." | |
| 11 Dec 2007 |  Courtney ´ Shortney´ Rodgers | Loading... Wow, what can I say. I've only read one of your stories but I love your writing style. Keep it up!
Courtney | |
