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Chani L. Petro

"Midnight Land" by Chani L. Petro

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Midnight Land

Beautiful face

Luscious lips

Glistening teeth

Throbbing throat

Gentle kiss

Grabs your neck

Bits down hard

Softly scream

Falling limp

In his arms

Drinking deeply

Fulfilling the need,

The hunger, the desire.

Death beckons

Holds your hand

Leads the way

To midnight land



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DateNameComment 
30 Nov 200345 Rachael
Why no comments on this one? It gives me the chills...
12 Feb 200445 Dark Rose
AWESOME!! Where do you get such awesome ideas for your writing?
30 Nov 200445 Anonymous
The last line of this poem has true power to it
30 Jul 200745 Rijael
I love it. The way you describe a simple bite of a vampire's.
30 Nov 2007:-) Phy Di Ulibar
Wow this poem gave me the chills. Very powerful, especially the last few lines.
11 Mar 200845 Anon.
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW OW!
16 May 2008:-) Molly B Keat
breathe taking
28 Jan 200945 Anon.
i love the end too! it gave me major chills.
6 Apr 2009:-) Mandy Tegan Kishena
incomplete sentences bug me...even in poems.
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'Midnight Land':
 • Created by: :-) Chani L. Petro
 • Copyright: ©Chani L. Petro. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dark, Midnight, Vampires
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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