| Date | Name | Comment | |
| 13 Aug 2005 | Damian J. Lewis | Loading...Excellent poem. I've never been big on poetry: a Yeats here, Tennyson there. Nothing of a big fan to poetry but I was pretty impressed by this. Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Why, thank you! I appreciate it !!! Take a cookie! *holds out basket of cookies*" | |
| 19 Aug 2005 | Julia Anna Rill | Loading...That is such a great and sad story! I love it! You can work with words in such a fantastic way! I am even a bit jealous! Great work! Maybe you should write poems more often? Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Thank you so much! Well I have tried to write more but it just wouldn't come out right... Oh well, one day something will come to me." | |
| 25 Aug 2005 | James 'Jimbo Fett ' Inwood | Loading...You can feel the longing this woman had. It was beautifuly done it's made me feel all soft and gooey inside y'know? Nice. *Thumbs up* Chelsea R. Doop replies: "I have succeeded in making someone all soft and gooey inside! YESSSS!!! WOOT WOOT! heh." | |
| 1 Sep 2005 | Dabao 'The Monkey' Jia | Loading...*speechless* I have nothing more to say...or not say, except for one thing...I think you should write more poems instead of stories, although ur stories are truly remarkable. I mean, if ur stories were royal, then ur poems are godly! ^_^ Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Godly... Wow. *sighs dreamily* T'would be quite a wondrous thing... *clears thoat* uhm... yes, anyway, thank you so much for that! I love the praise I've gotten for this. Now I'm writing a story on it which is turning out to be quite longer than I intended... And slowly. So, so slowly because of school and everything. I don't see how some people do it! " | |
| 29 Oct 2005 | Kathryn Leigh Schulze | Loading...Sad, but beautiful. I think you did a good job it is like someone is telling a story through a poem. I never really read much poetry, but i liked this. Chelsea R. Doop replies: "OH! Yes! Another one! Maybe I should write more poetry. Hook... Line... And sinker! Another poem caught the attention of others! YUS!!!!!Kay. I'm done. Glad you liked it!" | |
| 20 Dec 2005 | Chelsea Castonguay | Loading...Another Chelsea writer!! I love us!! Your poem is great, very moving and sad! Well written for sure, and I'll be dropping by again to check out some more stuff in the future. Have a good holiday! Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Yus! Got to love the Chelsea's! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I plan on dropping by your library as well! Again, I promise!" | |
| 23 Mar 2006 | Mercedes A Boggs | Loading...Such a moving poem, Chelsea. The imagery you used was beautiful. I'm truly impressed. Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Oh thank you! I've gotten such wonderful feedback for this and I'm so proud of it... Thanks so much!" | |
| 29 Aug 2006 | Randy L Anfinson II | Loading...Chelsea, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I could sense the deep emotion of the ghost, watching those she loved love someone else, grow old, and eventually die, and watching love all around, but feeling empty and alone. Great poem!! | |
| 29 Aug 2006 | Randy L Anfinson II | Loading...Chelsea, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I could feel the feelings of the ghost, watching those she loved love someone else, grow old, and eventually die. Great poem!! Chelsea R. Doop replies: "Oh, I'm so glad everyone likes this. It's probably one of my favorites and I want to get it published one day. One can only hope!" | |
| 2 Oct 2006 | Dan Shevock | Loading...Great poem, I can't believe I hadn't read it until now. I love the rhythm, it's just long enough to feel like each verse is a diary entry or something like. I loved "in a blink of an eye," and from then on the events start moving faster. Chelsea R. Doop replies: "*eyes widen noticeably* Oh my! How did you find this place?! *runs around sweeping up cobwebs* I'm so sorry for the mess! Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a comment though! *sighs happily* You're the first in a while. Well, besides Musty, but that's not the point. Thank you so much! It's so nice to have new commenters! *hugs Dan* Just for stopping by, you get one of my rare gigantic chocolate chip cookies!" | |
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