This is gorgeous. Really gorgeous, it really caught my eye. I love her hair and the dress. I myself do draw, but I write more and seeing your work really makes my mind reel with all ideas for new stories.
This was was the first one that I got a good story line from. She looks like a princess. She’d be the spoiled type that looks down on others. But only because her mind is already out of the bounds of the castle. Free from her parents wishes to learn how to be a ’proper queen’. She isn’t who she really is, if you get what I mean.
That opportunity comes to her when war strikes the country and troops from other parts of the land get called in.
She’d sneak off and join a troop, wanting to do more for her country in appearance of a young man(/elf.)
Of course the leader of that troop is the love interest and oblivious first to who she is. Because.. Loreli... that would be her name, is a princess and used to get her way she acts difficult and raises suspicious of Thorn, the troop commander, eventually leading to him finding out she is the princess.
Loreli had met him before as the princess herself and immediately had taken a disliking to him because he could point out that she was only pretending. He acted sweet in front of her parents and then when they left them to ’get to know each other’ he opened up to her and pointed out her flaws and basically looked down on her.
Of course in the story line we’d have the enemy finding out she’s the princess, yadiyablabla. And as for the ending I’d have Loreli take note of Thorns words that she should be herself and go against her parents ect. ect.
Since I don’t believe in happy endings (because then I can never stop my stories and just go on and on and I don’t like those sappy love stories that end ’happily ever after’.) Thorn would return to his country and they’d meet only like years and years later.
Which could be a sequel but I’m not going to plan that out now, hehe. I really love your work, its amazing
