| 29 Nov 2006 | Samuel E Martens | Loading...Now I can’t believe no one has commented on this pic. This one is very well done. | |
| 15 Dec 2006 | Bloppyblue (the master critic) | Loading...Nice unicorn. I have some advice for you, but thats the reason why im here. I would like to make it clear, that a unicorn is basically a horse with a narwhale horn, so the anatomy of a horse still applies. ~ The lower lip of the unicorn is too far up, maybe moving it back a bit would make it look like its not pouting or something. ~ The picture seems very.. round.. The horse looks chubby, i dont know if thats the look you are looking for, but i just wanted to point it out if you havnt noticed (which im sure you have.) ~ The horn of a unicorn comes out of the forehead, not the top of the head. The place where you have put your horn is actually where the ears would properly go. If you were to continue drawing the cheekbone striaght up, it should end up at the tip of the ear. ~ The hair/mane at the forehead should be black, just like the rest of the mane. There is also a skull beneath that unicorn, so the fore hair/mane shouldnt be squared.
Thats it! Arent you glad you can stop reading me insulting your drawing? I am sorry if i have hurt your feelings or anything like that, but dont feel sorry for it. I love your unicorn, very nice, and all i've mentioned are little details. (i've studdied horse anatomy and junk like that) So keep up the good work. | |