| 19 Aug 2004 | Brian | Loading...It looks right but it might look better if he had a small vein popping out of his neck | |
| 23 Aug 2005 | Trevor Mathis | Loading...Perhaps the tip of the sword should be cutting into the ground. Then it would look very heavy as even the ground is unable to heft it's weight. | |
| 1 Mar 2007 | Raquel Tabitha Boyce | Loading...As a mime, I learned that the number one rule for simulating weight is bent knees. When we had to pretend we were carrying a very heavy object, we had to bend our knees as if the object were pulling our bodies downward. So, just as a suggestion, perhaps if you ever redraw this picture you can bend his knees more.  Your picture made me chuckle. I actually have a picture in cue called "The Pen is Mightier." | |
| 18 Dec 2010 | Anon. | Loading...Interesting picture, but he looks muscled enough and he probably should be able to wield a heavy sword. When the sword is too heavy for a guy like him, it mostly means that the balance is bad, not that he’s not strong enough (I mean, he should at least be able to lift it!). Also, I agree with bending his knees, it would definitely look better. | |