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"Winter Night" by Crystine Mariel Cimiluca

SciFi/Fantasy text 4 out of 4 by Crystine Mariel Cimiluca. ←Previous - Next→

Night seems strange to the visiting eye...

Unbiased and pure, virgin bliss

igniting the brain, scribbling thoughts:

ink to blood, ink to strength.

Earth crumbles to steel, smooth and unstoppable,

pounding the sand with watery fists.

Dark ice surrounds us, ghostly watchers.

Winds gnaw greedily on exposed ears,

life threatens to pull away.

The stars draw back to glassy pinpoints,

frightened satellites seldom linger

in the presence of textile blackness.

Free to gyrate at its will,

its path is abandoned. Time vanishes.

The astral jungle, hacked to pieces,

is the wake of passing hours

thinly veiled in the guise of a second

Date	Name	Comment
26 Oct 2000	Jakegarbe	Loading... <Snaps his fingers> Yeah. Hey, good poem, I especially liked the part about "astral jungle". That's pretty darn cool. Kudos to you, cool poem!
17 May 2001	Megan L. Butcher	Loading... Wow. i know i am not suposed to say that i am looking at the thing above the comment box where is says dont do anthing wow but i cant help it. This is beautiful!!