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"Wicked Angel" by Mike S. Theodorsson

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WICKED ANGEL

You like the evil and the haunting ghosts
Shadow and demon spirits more than most
You cannot turn back now, my dear
Trapped in madness, evil and fear

You can't deny that you are walking with the beast
You won't have a place to hide when he'll feast
It is impossible for you to face his might
You cannot force the darkness back into the night

As the night draws its shadows through
The darkness turns to you
Burden and sadness that goes by the heart
And soon your little life falls apart

Irredeemably dark, you have chosen the path
You have not my pity nor mercy, you have my wrath
But now, away from those scorching dreams
The pain is not what is seems

Rise, now my wicked angel, rise
I believed you and your lies
But that time has long since passed
And I am free of you now, at last

←- The Passing of the Darkness | Fallen Warrior -→

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16 Mar 200445 Tania Stanislaski
Do you always use dark so much in your work? It's very good i have read your other work aswell and you should be proud that you can write like that. Bye1
16 Mar 200445 Anonymous
That was brillant..........
16 Mar 2004:-) Karin Schadinger
This is great! Especially the last four lines. 2 Well done MIKE! 2
19 Mar 200445 Anonymous
This poem has a good flow to it. Sounds like you're angry at a muse or a spirit that was torturing you.And they're being tortured by a higher tormenter that they can't get away from-yet. It is very well constructed.4<:
17 Feb 2007:-) Steven Stojcevski
I thought this poem was very interesting. I'm still not sure though who the "you" is referring to in the poem. I had two thoughts, either a demon as Anonymous said on March 19, or I thought it might even refer to the reader. Also I thought I'd let you know about a small typo on line 16 where I think "is" is supposed to be "it". Overall a very promising poem, keep up the good work!
18 Jul 2007:-) Trevor J. Molineaux
wow "I belevie you and your lies"??? wow thats crazy and it is a really good poam
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About 'Wicked Angel':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Mike S. Theodorsson
 • Copyright: ©Mike S. Theodorsson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angel, Dark, Wicked, Blasphemous, Shadow, Evil, Darkness, Woman
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Ghosts, Ghouls, Aparitions, Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc., Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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