| 16 Mar 2004 | Tania Stanislaski | Loading...Do you always use dark so much in your work? It's very good i have read your other work aswell and you should be proud that you can write like that. Bye  | |
| 16 Mar 2004 | Anonymous | Loading...That was brillant.......... | |
| 16 Mar 2004 | Karin Schadinger | Loading...This is great! Especially the last four lines.  Well done MIKE!  | |
| 19 Mar 2004 | Anonymous | Loading...This poem has a good flow to it. Sounds like you're angry at a muse or a spirit that was torturing you.And they're being tortured by a higher tormenter that they can't get away from-yet. It is very well constructed.  <: | |
| 17 Feb 2007 | Steven Stojcevski | Loading...I thought this poem was very interesting. I'm still not sure though who the "you" is referring to in the poem. I had two thoughts, either a demon as Anonymous said on March 19, or I thought it might even refer to the reader. Also I thought I'd let you know about a small typo on line 16 where I think "is" is supposed to be "it". Overall a very promising poem, keep up the good work! | |
| 18 Jul 2007 | Trevor J. Molineaux | Loading...wow "I belevie you and your lies"??? wow thats crazy and it is a really good poam | |