"Tula with a Jasmine twist" by Danielle Lea Grady

From my point of view only, there could be some changes made to your pic that would make it look better. Such as the hands. Unless youre going for another look, humans' hands are usually around the size of their faces. Her head is as wide as her waist, which makes her look slightly abnormal. No one is that skinny. Her feet are also in an odd position, like she's doing ballet. Normally, we would stand with our feet facing frontwards, or slightly at an angle. Make sure to have her hands come down to about mid-thigh also.

Danielle Lea Grady replies: "#1 this is a cartoon. #2 it's MY interpretation. #3 dont care and #4 my head is the size of my waist..... ^.^"

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This picture us great!!! Good job!!!

This pick is rlly good aswell

I looks pretty i like it

All I've got to say is does she eat? It doesn't look like it!!

Okok i dont think it looks like anything

I looove the hunch back of burtra dame style?.. Not!

Woi! A fellow PoDW-fan? I could hug you! I must admit, Jasmine looks quite a lot like Tula when you mention it, why haven't I ever thought of that? I really like her face, and the fact that you included the cleaved eyebrows, such a nice little detail. As other people already have mentioned, the proportions aren't perfect, but don't care about that. The pic has got a very nice cartoon-ish look about it, which would probably be ruined if you changed it. In short: I like it very much, good job!

And just a small message to "sos", who has written something negative about every single picture in this gallery: unless you've got any _constructive_ criticism to come with, please shut up. We all know by now that you're a jealous little crybaby, so please leave the artist alone and don't make a fool out of yourself again.

Sorry for the book, I just got a bit carried away and annoyed at all the unneccessary flamers who just want to complain over good pictures... *blush*

this is fantactice