|3 Dec 2002|| R.E. 'Riibu' Kankaanpää|
Excellently put. It didn't dawn to me at first, but now... oh I must say, great! Well done! Bravo! (and so on, you writer you.)
And I also liked the story. Danny Staten
replies: "Thanks for the comment. Sorry I took so long to reply. I am glad to hear you liked the story as well. I figured this would get more comments because it is shorter, but I think my story is a much better piece overall. This was a lot of fun to write one evening at work when I was bored and my mind wandered to the disturbing idea."
|3 Dec 2002|| Stephan P. Calloway|
This is OUTSTANDING writing!
My compliments. Danny Staten
replies: "Thanks. Sorry it took so long to reply. I enjoy writing, but wish I was better at it, and more prolific with my keyboard ."
|3 Dec 2002|| Jukka Bushtail|
Woah! I love the opening to this. I don't see a typo either. The first two lines are great! Do you mind if I nick them? Danny Staten
replies: "Thanks for the comment. It is nice to hear you like these insane ramblings of my mind . I really don't care if you use the first two lines as long as the rest of what you write is very different. Sorry it took me so long to reply, by now you probably have alredy used the lines or moved on to other stuff. Anyway, thanks for the comment."
|20 Jun 2004|| Megan McGrath|
Oh wow....that is brilliant. It was cool how it kept me guessing what the world he was talking about until almost the end, also. Brilliant idea, I bet you could go a lot farther with this....but something tells me you don't want to. ;-) That happen with all my story ideas.
|18 May 2009|| Anna Moonfrost|
wow this has made me want to read anything else you’ve writen... Wow....
|26 Aug 2009|| Matt Roach Koger|
Very nice. Dark AND creepy with a borderline reality me likie ^_^