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Douglas Eckhart

"I didn´t want to suck" by Douglas Eckhart

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My first attempt at the horror genre. Let me know what you think.
And if you are having dirty thoughts about the word suck then shame on you!

(Submitted: June 2, 2005)
(Updated Jan. 1, 2006: Changed 'I am' in line 5 to 'I'm')

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I didn't want to suck

Vampires
They bite me
and suck my blood
it really hurts
now I'm one of them
yuck

←- My Unicorn is so Horny | Violent Fluff -→

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7 May 200845 Yoshima Ramiko
I Loved this one it was awsome!.1

:-) Douglas Eckhart replies: "Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed it. "
26 May 2008:-) Christina F.
hehe! I really like this!! I think it is because it isn’t really serious it is just kind of goofy and different!! 1 Awesome job!!

:-) Douglas Eckhart replies: "I was hoping to get away from the trend of, "I am vampire, lord of night" style. I think it is a requirement to have at least one vampire poem on your Wyvern shelf, though! 1"
13 Jun 200845 Savanna
My father said most people on here were pros but I guess(sorry not be mean) you are not one of them that poem barely rhymes. Normally the two words that rhyme with each other are at the end of a sentence not in the middle and i am sorry if thins hurt your feelings or anything I am I just wanted to comment but I would like it more if it was in a story instead of a poem.
Suvi,10, 6/12/0811

:-) Douglas Eckhart replies: "I suppose it depends on your definition of ’pros’. Anyone can post material on here as long as they follow the rules, so the quality varies. 2

If you would like it more, please feel free to think of it as a six line short story. 2 Afterall, I believe someone published, "Once upon a time there was a story of one line." as a short story."
2 Jul 200845 MagiFreak
when i saw the title, i thought of something else. But i loved this!
14 Jul 200845 Anon.
lol
25 Jul 2008:-) Haley M Jones
Defiently not what I expected,but I guess thats cool!
23 Aug 2008:-) Hayley Anne Bell
I love the humour in this poem. Its simple and effective. Great work.
26 Aug 2008:-) Rachel Lawlor
Another funny one! You almost had a word count pattern there. You should add another three word line between "now I’m one of them" and "yuck" so it’ll be 1-3-4-3-4-3-1

Then again, I’m just weird and like those sorts of things XD
Don’t want you to try to force it and end up ruining it’s comedy =)
23 Oct 2008:-) Aletheia vaune preston
haha "yuck".
You are the best poem writer in the world 2
and im not even exaggerating

:-) Douglas Eckhart replies: "Thanks! 2 I appreciated all your comments!"
12 Apr 200945 Mike
Great poem!
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About 'I didn't want to suck':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Douglas Eckhart
 • Copyright: ©Douglas Eckhart. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Poem, Vampires
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 2018


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