"Darnoc 2" by David Mitchell

Hey, this picture is awesome. There is some really nice shading. It looks like you spent alot of time on it. You have a nice style. Really sketchy and really good. The proportions all seem perfect and there's alot of detail. The expression on the face is great. The one thing I noticed is that you seemed to have not finished the left ear... maybe you meant to make it look like that. Not sure, but this is definitely a really nice piece of art. Great Job.

Yummy! Awesome work, and I really mean that.

Hey, that sketchy style of yours is actually working out great. I can definitely see great things coming from it. You did well on the facial features and shading here, although there could have been more depth in the face. I always learned that you shouldn't be afraid to make large portions really dark (should work out better on a face). Even though I myself am not at all a master at it The tattoo has a great design (loving your sense of detail), but it appears to be a relief instead of a tattoo. Probably because of the strong line work, that creates the illusion of shadow. Nevertheless, it's a good thing that you did a close up-portrait. And of course, Darnoc is one of my favorites with his punching sword/dagger dual wield fighting style

As of today this picture has also been updated in terms of shading and facial detail. I've also used a darker scan to help convey the brooding nature of this character.

Personally I would have kept the white tone, but apart from that I think the modifications are an improvement. The nose makes him look more manly and tough, although I still think the mouth is rather small for a man.