| 16 Feb 2003 | Savanah Rose Stephens | Loading...WOW! I absolutely love the detail! I think this piece is wonderfully drawn. Good job and congrats on Mod's choice! | |
| 17 Feb 2003 | Anonymous | Loading...It's nice, but GAH! it's waaay too busy. You can't seperate the characters from the background.
keep working on it, you'll get there. | |
| 18 Feb 2003 | Angela K Scott | Loading...the comment above does hold some truth- the person could have said it much better though...really, if you work on the values/contrast it will distinguish the foreground and background and easier to view. But good job! | |
| 26 Feb 2003 | Lieuwe Boer | Loading...Horizon = eye-level of the viewer. Anyone that is bigger than the viewer has his eyes above the horizon, anyone smaller has his eyes below, to put it simply. | |
| 26 Feb 2003 | Lieuwe Boer | Loading...Haha, congrats on getting mod's choice, you just keep lining 'em up eh? I agree with some other commenters that the figures in the foreground get overshadowed by the background. Maybe you should use a broader sized pen for linework in the foreground, to create thicker lines. Nevertheless, the ink linework makes the picture look sharper and tidier, and the black parts in the sky give the picture a nice effect. One more thing: according to perspective rules, right now Salogel is taller than Sakai and the Khaasta. Keep the horizon in mind when drawing perspective. Overall a great pic, worthy of mod's choice. | |
| 28 Feb 2003 | Cristina Alicia Drewes González | Loading...Uuuuuhhhh, very nice drawing | |
| 3 Jun 2003 | Otto Kantanen | Loading...That arrow sure didn't go far. O_o David Mitchell replies: "That's because he stabbed Star in the leg with it when she crept up behind him (hence the wound on her right thigh). " | |
| 3 Jul 2003 | Anonymous | Loading...The lips on the one dude aren't lips try making his face a facebesides that it's perfect | |
| 4 Jul 2003 | Anonymous | Loading...I have no idea what these people keep talking about in regards to "perspective". Maybe that's why I can't draw... | |
| 16 Sep 2007 | Christopher H. Morin | Loading...Awesome work on the background and details | |