"Zoard and Clyte" by David Mitchell

You have a great grasp on proportion and you seem to pay a lot of attention to detail on your backgrounds. That is very commendable, you must have quite some deal of patience. This is a fine drawing with great designs, the only words I might suggest are start focusing on details of the skin and trying to make it look more real. It looks good already and i'm sure you can improve it, but of course i'm not the best person to receive advice from. Anyway, great work here man, and again, nice backgrounds.

You have wonderful details to this drawing! And all shades from black to white plus correct proportions on the bodies as far as I can tell! However I will give you some pointerson the eyes. <BR><BR>
The eyes would look more natural if you didn't draw a black strong line around them. Especially the lowest line, when it approaches the nose, is quite light. What makes the contours around the eye is the lashes. The lashes are strongest on the upper eyelid. Then there are hairs on the lower lid, but scarcer, and not so much towards the nose. Well... that's my tip for you this time! ^_^ Hope you can make use of it somehow! And remember- mirror is not a bad thing, even when you draw women.

Today this picture has been updated, and mostly because I wanted to change Zoard's face, though the scan is of questionable quality.

I think the eyes are perfect in this picture, and so is the skin. Just because it's not perfectly realistic does not mean it's not good. I love this picture! The tones and textures in it are great, and so is the man and the woman in the background and the background itself. Good, GOOD job man. Keep it up.

Again I love your background. The woman is especially good. And the scull. I love the way it looks like it has depth.