| 11 Dec 2003 | Saara 'Fairy' Aitakangas | Loading...*gives a plate of first comment cookies* Hello there, and welcome to the woods... I hope to soon see some more of your story here... But now, I'll have to go read it. ^^ Dawn Jane Holliday replies: "Thank you for commenting and taking the time to read it! my first commenter ^_^ yay *huggles*" | |
| 8 Jan 2004 | Vanessa Nunes | Loading...Hey welcome to the woods  Will go read your work now Dawn Jane Holliday replies: "Hope you enjoy it.. thanks for visiting!" | |
| 13 Apr 2004 | Anonymous | Loading...I love your story!!! After i got done reading the second chapter i thought where's the rest??!!! I can't wait to read some more of your story!! | |
| 20 Oct 2006 | Erica Carter | Loading...You're very talented! I must say it takes a lot to write and then draw pictures for such a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading what you have here! This story of yours looks like it could go a long way. You should definitely publish it when you finish it and perhaps use your own pictures! It'll be a great success, I'm sure. Thank you for the enjoyment! I hope that more comes along so that I can go further into this wonderful tale. The liocorn is very inventive, by the way. You've captured my interest! | |