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"The Death of a Gypsy Star ~poem~" by Deborah Soukup

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The Death of a Gypsy Star

A gypsy star lies bleeding

Upon a sea of night

My mind ripples with silvered dark

And whispers ride a solemn chime of tears

As I cradle the broken wings of faith to my breast

And breathe its austere grace

Into the well of Light within

Seeking absolution

Seeking hope

A searcher evermore

Adrift

Waking illusion mourns

The falling of the star

Yet within the ambiguity

Of mortal longing

And the yearning of the Soul

I embrace the shadowed spirit of indecision

Blind to the song

Of destiny

A gypsy star lies dying

Upon a sea of night

 

Debbie

04~01~02

 

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18 Aug 2003:-) Hannah Louise Smith
WHAT???? No comments yet? You can write poetry realy well. Please send some of your muses my way. Do you mind if I put this on my tour? Please E-mail me if you wish it removed.
19 Aug 200345 Chiakalatina
You are a passionate writer. I'm liking your poetry very much. I would like it if you could send me your latest posts. Email me sometime.

Have a nic day!

:::Ciao...mai:::
25 Sep 2003:-) Amanda Leigh Johnson
Wow. I love your style. So mystical and entriguing. A masterfully done piece
21 Nov 200345 Loralin Elurah Salazar Mastropaulo <a
It is a beautiful piece, one who intrigues a reader to read on. It is quite powerful, and its title complements it like strawberries and whipped cream (seriously). I am but a young writer, and poems like this are what inspire me and feed my yearning to learn the ART of poetry2
- Ciao
Loralin E.S. Mastropaulo
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