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"Angel´s Wings" by Deborah Cullins Smith

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Written in tribute to Henry Bruce Cullins, my beloved cousin by birth, my brother at heart. Cancer took him from us on March 5, 2005. But we'll see him again one day...
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ANGEL’S WINGS
By Deborah Cullins Smith
March 5, 2005
A Tribute to Henry Bruce Cullins, my beloved cousin by birth, my brother at heart.



The soft rustle
     Of angel’s wings
Whisper in sterile corridors
     Amid the squish of soft-soled shoes.
          Love’s desperation
          Shakes its head
               And silently cries, “It’s too soon…”

The soft rustle
     Of angel’s wings
Hover gently over the steady stream
     Of visitors and loved ones
As pain’s mask descends.
     Hands that guided bicycles
          And helped little fingers
           Into baseball mitts
Now grip bed sheets
      In white-knuckled fists.
The voice that once shouted cheers
      From a coach’s bench
      Whispers final words of love.
Eyes that glowed
      With a father’s pride,
      And a husband’s devotion
            Glisten with damp sorrow.

The soft rustle
     Of angel’s wings
Grows louder now,
     Closer…
And desperate hope is
     Replaced by grim knowledge
     And the shattering
          Of fragile broken hearts.
Weakness overcomes strenth,
     Amid cries of, “Not yet…”

The soft rustle
     Of angel’s wings
Beats in exuberant joy
     As pain falls away,
          Never to be felt again.
Heavenly trumpets echo
     As the pearl gates
          Swing open.
Tender smiles,
     Gentle kisses brush
     Tear-stained cheeks –
          Not felt, but given anyway.

One last look of love lingers
     On each beloved face.
And he whispers,
      “I’ll be waiting for you…”
    
Then the soft rustle
     Of angel’s wings
                         Carries him safely home.
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29 Jun 2006:-) Patricia M. D´Angelo
I cried with this one. It is easy to whisper not yet, not yet, because it is so hard to let go. Knowing their pain is forgotten and a day shall come when we are united does indeed help deal with all the feelings, but I think a part of us will always say not yet. You have had more than your share of letting go happen, but I do think those in heaven send us strength, otherwise It would be too much to bear.

:-) Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Knowing this poem touched you so deeply helps me to know that it was time to share it. I wrote this right after the visitation, the night before the funeral, and it was shared first with only my family members. I've hesitated to post it, largely because it IS such a personal poem -- laying my soul bare, so to speak. But if it touches hearts, it has become a tool in the Hands of the Master, and should be available to Him for His own use. To God be the glory... Thanks for once again sending me the encouragement you are so good at giving, Trish! ~deb"
17 Aug 2006:-) Emma-Jane C. Smith
*snif*

'Tis sad and happy at the same time. Well done Deb, you're a champ at writing wonderful poems like this! Love ya!

:-) Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Holy toasters!! I didn't realize I was THIS behind on comments! Thanks, Em. Your comments are always a welcome bright spot in my day. Thanks ever so much. This one is a poem close to my heart, since I wrote it after the death of my dear cousin Bruce. Glad you liked it, Em. ~deb"
19 Dec 2006:-) Dragonsluver
This poem is so sarrowfully touching. I loved how you repeated the angels wings and their soft rustling. You are able to commuticate emotions so well with your words and I appriciate the things you were able to communicate without saying anything. Being a Christain and a believer in Heaven, I really loved your imagery with the pearly gates- hopefully everyone will one day be able to enter them. *sniffs* Everything word of this pulls at one's heartstrings! You are such an amazing poet!

:-) Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thank you, Rachel! **hands out tissues** As you could see by my introduction, this was written for a close cousin when he passed away. It's nice to meet a fellow believer! I do hope you'll visit often, Rachel! ~deb"
30 Jul 2007:-) David Michael
{smiles} God bless you, friend. I admit that I'm more selective in my poetry and generally dislike free form, but that point is often waived for personal works. Your imagery and metaphors here are quite effective at communicating that raw and poetic emotion, grief. The repetition of "the soft rustle / of angel's wings" was particularly nice.

Some people find it easier to write poetry in times of sorrow and passion, and I envy you for that ability. I've only managed it twice, and I only had the courage to post one such attempt recently as allegory, but usually I'm so caught up in my dreams and memories of what was lost that words seem to leave me alone out of respect. Your courage at sharing this is admirable. Thank you. It's comforting when you know that a loved one passes on because God desires their presence so eagerly. I wish I could have that assurance more often.

:-) Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thanks so much, David. You comment is a much-needed boost right now. My poetry usually IS the result of extreme emotion, and less "formed" than the required discipline of traditional verses. But I'm glad you could appreciate its content! **hugs**"
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'Angel's Wings':
 • Created by: :-) Deborah Cullins Smith
 • Copyright: ©Deborah Cullins Smith. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angels, Death, Father, Heaven, Husband, Love, Pain, Tears, Wings
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
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