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"Battle of the Angels" by Deborah Cullins Smith

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During a bout of deep depression, I fell back on the comfort of poetry. Battle of the Angels was the result.
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                         BATTLE OF THE ANGELS
                            by Deborah Cullins Smith



Suffocating despair,
    Ominous foreboding,
        Black leathery wings
            Blot out the sun.

Pain descends,
    Depression’s cloak
        Smothers human hope
            With a stench of despair.

Evil laughter,
    Faith dies,
        Soul’s enemy smells
            The sweaty odor of victory.

Swords flash,
    Thunder roars,
        Lightning splits the sky
            As weapons clash.

Soft sobs
    Underscored with inhuman screams,
        Soul weeps,
            As powers collide.

Silver swords
    Rip through black wings,
        And demons shriek
            In angry frustration.

Snowy white feathers
    Comfort the sobbing soul,
        Renewing faith,
            Imparting new hope.

Angels’ wings ---
    In black and white ---
        Battling for one soul’s hope…
            Comfort found in God’s presence.
            

←- Angel's Wings | Bessie -→

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25 Jan 2008:-) Fireangel334
very very pretty, i like it a lot. ;-) i love the image-ary of angels clashing... hope u keep up the creative and beautiful work!

54 Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thank you so much! I’m so glad you visited. I’m just waaaaaaaay behind on getting replies done. I appreciate your comment though. Please come again. deb"
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About 'Battle of the Angels':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Deborah Cullins Smith
 • Copyright: ©Deborah Cullins Smith. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angels, Demons, Depression, Battle, Deliverance, Comfort, Pit
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Demons, Imps, Devils, Beholders..., Fights, Duels, Battles
 • Views: 404


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