Donald Jones has spent his life dispensing mental health care, and suddenly finds himself relegated to a nursing home. Then Gregory walks into his room and his past, and changes Donald's future in ways the lofty doctor could never have imagined.
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ROOM 660
By Deborah Cullins Smith
The stench was overpowering.
Donald hated hospitals; nursing homes stood at the gates of hell.
His disdain, reflected in his grimace, grew like a shadow cast against
the dinghy walls. He hated them, always had, these outcasts of
society. The elderly, the deformed, the diseased – the dregs of
humanity withering in the forgotten corners of the world.
And now he was joining their ranks.
Wheelchairs lined the walls. Ancient crones sat, their spastic
limbs twisted into gross caricatures of the vibrant lives they had once
lived. Most seemed catatonic – mere extensions of the chairs that
held their shattered remains. A few glared, seething at the
circumstances that chained them to this dreary exile.
“How much further?” he asked the silent orderly who escorted him
through these horrid hallways. He wanted – no, needed –
solitude. The pain around him was a monstrous entity with a life
of its own.
“Just about there,” replied the uncommunicative man behind him.
“Room 660.”
Donald had seen the man when he was checked in at the front desk.
Tall, thin, with dark, shoulder-length hair, he had deep set fathomless
eyes that showed no signs of warmth or human comfort.
A short, fat woman waddled into the hallway from a room on the
left. Her angry black eyes bore into his own with contemptuous
arrogance.
“Whatchu looking at, Pig!” she shouted at him. “No
excuses! There’s no excuse for an ugly mess like you. You
could look better if you just tried. But oh, no! Not Mr.
Hotshot. Look atchu. Ain’t nothin’ but a lump o’ lard now.”
Rolls of fat wriggled with indignation, dementia shooting sparks like
lightning bolts from her twisted features.
Her belligerance crackled like static as other patients came to life
and added their own epitaphs.
“Not so fancy now, are ya’?” shouted a skinny woman in a ratty
robe, her hair sticking out in tangled strands. “Stuck in here
with the rest of the outcasts. Serves you right!”
“Hey, Big Shot!” screeched a hunch-backed man, his toothless gums
visible in the leering grin. “So you’re stuck in this place just
like all the rest of us.” His maniacal laugh came straight out of
an old horror film.
‘Igor’ would have been envious, thought Donald wryly.
Obscenities followed him all the way down the long corridor.
Where was he going? Outer Mongolia? The headache had set in
from the moment Donald crossed this institution’s threshold and it
didn’t show any signs of disappearing in the foreseeable future.
If only this stupid intern would pick up the pace, Donald thought
angrily. I can’t stand this place and I haven’t even seen the
room yet. Mingling is definitely NOT going to be on my agenda.
The abrupt turn through an open door to the right took Donald by
surprise. Room 660, and it was worse than he had imagined. He
surveyed the spartan room with distaste. Donald had enjoyed
extravagance all of his adult life. This pristinely plain room –
four walls, a window with tan curtains, a single hospital bed, and a
tacky vinyl chair – did nothing to boost his morale.
Donald missed his study with floor-to-ceiling cherry shelves filled
with leather-bound classics and medical reference books. His
massive, hand-carved desk held a state-of-the-art computer, engraved
daily calendar cube, pens in a brass holder, and a gold clock in a
glass dome. Elegant wing-back chairs flanked the fireplace, and a
fully stocked liquor cabinet graced the corner by the patio
doors. The room proudly proclaimed itself a gentleman’s
retreat. Heavy damask curtains with gold roped tie-backs framed
the view of neatly manicured lawns and the lavish rose gardens.
Donald had spent hours in his study. After long days at the
Baybridge Institute for the Mentally Ill, he was always quite ready for
a scotch and soda, and an hour or two of privacy. The days he
visited the Bellington State Hospital required Crown Royal, a double,
no ice. He detested those visits. It was a dumping ground
for the poor and destitute handicapped. And Donald hated weakness
of any kind.
The orderly reached down and snapped the foot rests up on the
wheelchair as he simultaneously locked the wheels. Wordlessly, he
tucked a supporting arm around Donald and hoisted him out of the
chair. Two steps to the bed, and Donald found himself perched by
a stainless steel hand rail.
Still silent, the orderly unlocked the wheels and glided out of the
room. His departure was most certainly swifter than his journey
to this room had been.
A hospital gown lay draped across the cotton waffle-weave blanket at
the foot of the bed. Donald eyed it with distaste. His
luggage was supposed to be delivered here, though it was nowhere to be
seen. His own pajamas were navy satin and would be far more
comfortable than that ragged cotton gown with no back to it.
Without warning, his door opened and a tall man with coal black hair,
grown out rather long over his collar, strode into the room. His
white coat was crisply immaculate, tie perfectly knotted, and leather
shoes gleamed with polish. A hint of Pierre Cardin wafted into
the room with him. The overall effect radiated prosperity,
professional prominence, and polished perfection… the same
essence that Donald himself had exuded until about two years ago.
“Mr. Donald Jones,” the man read, eyes glued to the chart. He had
yet to actually make eye contact with his disgruntled patient.
“Dr. Jones, if you please,” Donald stated stiffly.
“Hmmmm…?” the man was still immersed in the notes. Looking up at
Donald with a bemused expression, the man flashed a condescending
smile. “What was that, Mr. Jones?”
“DR. Jones,” Donald repeated, slightly louder this time.
The man eyed Donald as though amused. “Come now, Mr. Jones, you
haven’t practiced medicine in … what? … five years or more?”
Donald’s temper was rising as bright splotches of color flamed on his
high cheek bones. He was accustomed to deference and
respect. This man’s insolence was totally unacceptable.
The man flashed Donald a look of strained patience over a superior
mocking smile.
“What if I just call you ‘Donald’?” he suggested. “Maybe that
would be more appropriate to your current … ah … situation.”
Now Donald was trembling with rage.
“Maybe,” he said with gritted teeth, “you should call me DR.
Jones. You know, as a sign of respect for one of your
professional colleagues, Doctor. I was practicing in mental
health fields while you were still sucking your thumb and wetting the
bed.”
The doctor’s smile hardened and his voice became cold as an Arctic
blizzard. “Well, you don’t practice any longer, Donald, and I am
the professional here. I’m afraid you’ll have to play by my rules
now.”
Donald’s rage exploded.
“Why, you…”
His reply was cut short as the doctor stepped forward and pinned him to
the bed. Before he knew what hit him, Donald felt the jab of a
hypodermic syringe in his shoulder and the world faded to black with a
dull hum.
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The world slid in and out of focus, and voices buzzed like pesky flies
at the periphery of Donald’s consciousness. The fuzzy drone was
annoying, but he couldn’t decipher specific words or phrases. He
tried to move, but his muscles didn’t seem to be obeying his commands.
The plain white walls reflected the sunlight filtering through the
plain tan curtains, and shone against the plain gold vinyl of the
single chair in the plain room. The plain white blanket was
pulled up to Donald’s chest, the plain blue hospital gown peeking at
him defiantly just above the covers. Much more of these plain
surroundings and Donald felt he would rapidly deteriorate into one of
the demented patients he saw on his way to this devilishly plain world.
Donald groaned, closed his eyes, hoping this nightmare would disappear
when he opened them again. It wasn’t a nightmare. The room
didn’t vanish. Donald moaned and tried to massage his temples
with his fingertips. To his dismay, his hands wouldn’t reach his
face. He frowned. This couldn’t be good. He tried
again and realized that restraining straps locked his wrists to the bed
rails. He jerked at them, shocked at this unwarranted assault on
his person. This was outrageous! How dare they restrain the
prominent psychiatrist, Dr. Donald Albert Jones!
The indignity of the situation sliced through him like a dagger.
He felt shame and humiliation shroud his heart.
Why didn’t I curb my temper, he thought bitterly. I should have
seen this coming. It’s exactly what I would have done with an
angry patient.
Donald closed his eyes as pain washed through his heart. Remorse
hit hard, then faded in a wave of self-pity. Donald had never
given much credence to remorse. It was a waste of time and
energy, and he usually dismissed it as a commodity unworthy of his
consideration. After all, he was a professional, paid to deal
with the pathetic masses. If they gave way to dementia, fell off
the wagons of substance abuse, or suffered nervous collapses, they were
weak, self-indulgent creatures who deserved to be locked away.
Society hates weakness, he reasoned. I only facilitate the shift
from family burden to institutional closet.
Then the epiphany hit.
I’ve become the burden I’ve hated all these years.
The door to his room opened, and a tall thin man entered. He
didn’t look like a doctor. Dressed in a black silk shirt and
black slacks, the man exuded an air of quiet reserve, of infinite
patience, and a calm detachment. His tie was a geometric blend of
black, gray, and pearly white. Salt and pepper hair, neatly
groomed, gray eyes, clean- shaven, the man in black took in Donald’s
humiliation without a word. His unruffled demeanor gave no hint
of superiority or condescension.
“Dr. Jones, I presume?” the man said with a tilt of his head.
Donald’s pride rose, as did his chin. “Are you in charge of this
facility?” he asked.
The man in black smiled ever so slightly. “We-e-e-e-ell, let’s
just say I’m here to help you settle in.”
“I do not wish to settle in,” Donald seethed. “Your staff is
inconsiderate, your doctor arrogant, and these rooms look like they
were decorated by Better Prisons and Outhouses.”
The man in black looked around and summoned a wry smile. “Guess
they do lack a touch of class, don’t they.” His eyes shifted back
to meet Donald’s. “Let’s do away with these,” he said nodding
toward the restraints. “Maybe things will look better once we’ve
made you more comfortable.”
Donald’s arms were free in a heartbeat. He rubbed his wrists
ruefully. The mild manner of his visitor was disarming.
“Just who are you?” asked Donald. “Do you run this nuthouse?”
“You may call me Gregory,” the man in black said. “I don’t like
to stand on too much ceremony with our guests. And especially
with a prominent physician such as yourself.”
Gregory’s smile had a soothing effect, but Donald wasn’t quite ready to
capitulate to the man’s charm. The sting to his pride was still
painful, and he made a show of rubbing his chafed wrists.
“Well, Gregory,” Donald said, stressing the name with a touch of
sarcasm. “Your hospitality leaves a lot to be desired.”
“Aside from our obvious lack of décor and a … hmmmm … slight
tiff with Dr. Boniface,” he smiled, “what else seems to disturb you?”
Donald bristled. Tiff? He thought. Understatement of the
century…
The slow stroll down the corridor flashed through Donald’s mind, and a
frown creased his forehead.
“What is the point of that little reception committee out there?” he
asked. He shuddered at the memory of the abusive comments and
insults hurtled at him in the hall.
“Well, Dr. Jones, think back to your own practice. Most people
resent institutions like this one. No one ever thinks dementia
will happen to him. It’s a shock when they find their minds
failing, their relatives unable to cope. Don’t you remember your
own cases?”
Donald was startled to realize that he did. In detail…
“Why don’t you tell me?” said Gregory as he settled into the tacky
vinyl chair.
Donald could picture her clearly.
“Three hundred fifty pounds,” he said. “Mrs. Allacardan.
Her husband came to me. He said she had waved a butcher knife at
him. He was concerned for his own well being, he said, but he was
afraid she was going to hurt herself as well.”
Donald sighed.
“Did you counsel her?”
“Counsel?” Donald snorted with disdain. “The woman was
psychotic. Paranoid Schizophrenia. She needed
round-the-clock care and heavy medication.”
Donald shifted restlessly under the steady gaze of his visitor.
Doubts had always assailed his conscience over Mrs. Allacardan.
“What’s the matter, Dr. Jones?” asked Gregory.
“Donald,” he said grudgingly. “You can call me Donald.”
Gregory smiled, but Donald couldn’t look him in the face for
long. Somehow he knew that Gregory was not going to let the
subject of Mrs. Allacardan slip away. Sure enough…
“Why don’t you tell me about Mrs. Allacardan, Donald?”
“Harrison Allacardan was my investment advisor,” Donald said with a
sigh. “His corporation specialized in T-bills and ‘creative’ IRA
accounts. Their clients were the cream of society. They
catered to – no, courted – the best in all fields. Medicine,
engineering, computer sciences, law… It was a high rung on the
social ladder to rub shoulders with their clientele. Harrison’s
wife was …” Donald hesitated, “… a liability.”
“Poor Gladys had a gift for sticking her foot in her mouth. She
cost the corporation several big accounts with tactless comments.
Harrison was constantly pulling her aside to tell her to shut up.
No party was complete until Harrison had apologized to half a dozen
guests for his wife’s behavior.”
Donald sighed again and focused on the porous ceiling tiles.
“Finally Gladys gave up. Nothing she said or did could measure up
to Allacardan’s standards. While Harrison worked the room, Gladys
parked at the buffet table. Food became her addiction, and she
packed on the weight at an alarming rate. Hell, she’d eat
everything but the floral centerpieces.”
Donald pictured the puffy cheeks, the disheveled hair, tent-like
dresses that did nothing to conceal the layers and layers of wobbly
flesh. Fat fingers reached for appetizers as though they
possessed a will of their own.
“Gladys Allacardan was once a reasonably handsome woman, but as her
depression grew with her weight, she deteriorated into a whale of a
human being. All blubber.” Donald shuddered.
“She started coming to me for counseling at Harrison’s insistence, but
she refused to talk. I’d ask questions and get these blank stares
from her. She finally said that no matter what she told me, she
knew I wouldn’t believe her. Then she spent the rest of the
session staring out the window.”
Gregory’s gaze neither condemned nor condoned. He simply waited
for Donald to continue.
“By the time Harrison came to me with the tales of the kitchen knives,
rumors had all ready circulated that he had been seen all over town
with one woman after another. His secretary was playing hostess
at more and more of his office functions. Gladys always ‘had a
headache’ or ‘was visiting her mother’. Everyone saw through the
lies, but whispered that Gladys was a nut case or a closet drunk.
And by then, they weren’t very far from the mark.” Donald closed
his eyes as painful memories assailed him.
“So Harrison had all the sympathy, and Gladys was finally packed off to
a nursing home. The day I committed her, she just stared at me
with those accusing, angry eyes.”
Donald fell silent. He refused to add that he’d seen the bruises
for months, that he’d heard Harrison Allacardan call his wife horrid,
demeaning names, that Gladys had been seen in the emergency room four
times for drug overdoses. Harrison always played it off as his
wife’s growing dementia. But Donald had known the truth.
“What happened to her?” Gregory asked.
Donald couldn’t meet his eyes. “She died three months after her
commitment,” he said softly. “Squirreled away her sleeping pills
for a week, then took them all at once.”
“I see,” Gregory said slowly. “But you felt there was more to the
story than what Harrison Allacardan was presenting.”
“No!” snapped Donald. “Gladys Allacardan was a ghastly blob of a
woman. She should have taken better care of herself.
There’s no excuse for a self-indulgent woman like that. Of
course, she lost her husband. Why should he stay with a mental
case who embarrassed him at every turn?”
“And Mr. Allacardan?” asked Gregory
“Went from mistress to mistress,” Donald said after a lengthy
pause. “He finally married an heiress from New York City.”
“Then?” prodded Gregory gently.
“Just another variation on the same story,” Donald said wearily.
“Katherine was a classy woman when I first met her. Heads turned
when Katherine and Harrison walked into a room. But I watched her
smoke a little more, and refill the wine glass more often. Before
long, Katherine was downing shots of tequilla the way most people drink
water. Then came the snide remarks, always slightly louder than
necessary, about whatever secretary happened to be catering to
Harrison. And I watched Harrison gripping her arm a little
tighter as he escorted her out to the hallway for a private
tongue-lashing. Then the inevitable apologies, the excuses, and
finally the request that I ‘counsel’ his wife.”
“Let me guess,” Gregory said when Donald paused. “His business
associates chalked it up to a man who constantly chose the same type of
‘defective’ wives.”
Donald rubbed his eyes wearily and nodded. “Poor Harrison.
That’s what they all said.”
“What happened to her, Donald?”
“Harrison went on a business trip to Chicago with his newest in a long
line of secretaries. The second Mrs. Allacardan jumped off a
tenth story balcony while he was gone.”
“Jumped?”
“Yes,” whispered Donald. “That’s the way the police blotter read.”
“But you had doubts,” Gregory surmised.
Angry blotches of color rose on Donald’s cheeks.
“No!” Donald snapped. “There are other means of dealing with
stress besides emptying the booze bottle. She didn’t have to give
in to it. She…” his voice trailed off.
Gregory regarded him thoughtfully.
“I suppose Mr. Allacardan’s alibi was impeccable?”
There was a small hitch in Donald’s breathing, and he couldn’t meet
Gregory’s eyes.
“I heard that Harrison was seen at the airport, slipping into a cab as
the plane for Chicago took off. But the police were never able to
substantiate their suspicions. They found my name in Katherine’s
address book. I’m not sure why. She refused to see me, even
when Harrison tried to force her to seek help. I guess she
thought Harrison and I were too close for her to completely trust
me. Anyway, I was called in to identify the body and make a
statement concerning her mental condition.”
“I see,” said Gregory softly.
Silence stretched as though time had suddenly stopped.
“What about some of your other patients?” Gregory asked. “You had
a long career. Surely you must have had many success stories.”
“Of course,” Donald barked. “I was one of the top psychiatrists
in New York City.” For several minutes, he reeled off the names
of patients who left his offices to lead productive lives. But
each name brought to mind confidences shared, money filling his bank
account as he feasted on the miseries of the city’s elite.
As his voice faltered, another name floated on the air. He wasn’t
even certain he had been the one to utter it aloud.
Henry Tousignore.
Donald remembered the twisted frame, the vacant eyes, the hand that
gripped a bottle of Ripple, the toothless, not-quite-sane expression of
the wiry man with yesterday’s grizzled whiskers. And Henry’s
daughter, Lori Tousignore, stage name Lori Tousien.
Seductive, deliciously decadent Lori, the toast of Broadway, the
luminous actress whose career was skyrocketing to Fame’s Top Ten.
Their affair culminated in Donald’s office after hours.
Afterwards, Lori threatened to expose Donald’s less-than-professional
conduct unless… Of course. There was always an
“unless”. Lori’s deformed and mentally challenged father was an
embarrassment, and the steamy actress was determined to keep the old
man out of the public eye. Image was everything in her line of
work. And she certainly didn’t want to chuck out the money to
keep him in quality surroundings. Her earnings were being used to
further her social standing. Daddy needed to disappear into the
deepest darkest hole available, one of the places known for swallowing
up the indigent population and locking them out of sight.
Donald hated being part of her devious scheme. But then, his
ethics never mattered quite as much as his social position. Lori
could ruin him. He knew it … and so did she.
So Daddy was moved to Clayton State Hospital with the rest of society’s
dregs. Lori’s career shot to the top – until a tainted batch of
PCP sent her out the window of her penthouse apartment.
No matter how badly Donald wanted to release the old man – now that the
reason for locking him up was no longer alive to care – his hands were
tied. According to his own records, the old man was a danger to
himself and to others. To free the old man, Donald would have to
decry his own diagnosis. His reputation would be in
tatters. He just couldn’t risk it. Not for one senile old
man…
But Henri Tousignore’s eyes haunted Donald. Those rheumy, vacant
orbs followed him home at night, and watched as Donald downed his Crown
Royal, staring at the walls of his study and the dying embers in the
fireplace grate.
Henri died almost a year to the day after Lori’s swan dive. He
died alone and unloved, and was cremated, courtesy of the great State
of New York.
Donald couldn’t bring himself to divulge these details to Gregory,
although he was beginning to be uncomfortably aware that this man in
black might all ready know the gory details of his indiscretions.
Somehow Donald felt his very soul was laid open before this strange
man. Outside the window, the sun was setting, casting ominous
shadows on those plain white walls.
“I’m really tired now, Gregory,” he said. Would you mind if
we continued this little tete a’tete tomorrow?”
Gregory drew in a deep breath but remained seated in the tacky vinyl
chair.
“I’m sorry, Donald,” he said regretfully, “but you won’t have a
tomorrow.”
Donald gaped at him in confusion.
“Not have a tomorrow? What are you talking about, man?” His
voice rose in something akin to hysteria.
Gregory tugged at his cuffs as if hating what he must say next.
In his hesitation, Donald’s panic grew.
“Don’t you know, Donald?”
Silence.
Gregory heaved another regret-filled sigh.
“Come now, Donald. You’re an intelligent man. Some would
even say brilliant.” There was a hard glint in Gregory’s eyes now.
“What are you saying? What do you mean? How can you stop
tomorrow from coming? Who are you? What are you?”
Gregory watched the hysteria build, a bemused expression on his
handsome face.
“I’ll never understand it,” he said, shaking his head. “You
humans think you are immortal. Especially doctors. You
know, old boy, your lot are the worst of all.”
Donald’s heart was hammering now. His eyes were wild. This
man before him was either mad or… The alternative was too awful
to contemplate.
Gregory’s expression was impatient now.
“Oh, all right,” he said testily. “You need it spelled out for
you? Very well. Here it is.”
Gregory leaned forward and locked Donald in an unblinking stare.
“This is not one of your ordinary hospitals, Dr. Jones. All those
people in the corridor were your patients. I believe you would
call it ‘a taste of your own medicine’.” Gregory’s smile was
filled with malice. “I know you’ll forgive that little pun,
Donald. And if you don’t, well…. Where you’re going, it won’t
matter much. You’ll be playing by my rules, as Dr. Boniface would
say.”
Terror filled Donald’s veins like ice water, and he shook his head in
mute denial.
“Yes, Dr. Jones, your patients,” Gregory asserted, returning to his
previous point. “You were given one last chance at …
repentence.” He said the last word with repugnance.
“He,” Gregory pointed up with disdain, “always insists on these
ridiculous last chances. This was your opportunity to show
remorse for your crimes against your fellow man. But you - didn’t
- take - it.” He emphasized the last five words with venomous delight.
Donald experienced one brief moment of horror before his breath froze
in his lungs. Wide-eyed shock was the last expression on his face
when his heart stopped beating, and his spirit spun into free-fall,
plunging, spiraling, down, down, down…
Gregory stood over the tortured body of the late, great Doctor Donald
Albert Jones, psychiatrist, and relished the moment of victory.
“You know, Donald,” he said to the corpse, “it always amazes me, but
doctors seem to pass up the chance for repentance far more often than
any other species of humanity. Why is that, do you think?”
His laugh echoed in the cold, unadorned room.
“Ooops!” he said in mock consternation. “Guess I should have
asked that question before you died. Naughty me.”
Tugging at his cuffs once more, Gregory walked through the wall and
down the long corridor.
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Bobby was coming on shift. He hated this place. There was
nothing more depressing than the midnight shift at Clayton State
Hospital.
Randall met him at the desk, clipboard in hand.
“You’re not eager to leave tonight, are ya’?” Bobby asked with a
dry smirk.
“Don’t you know it,” Randall said. “What a day. It’s all
yours, buddy, and good luck.”
“We get any new fruitcakes today?” Bobby asked.
“Yeah,” Randall said, pointing to the log’s single new entry.
“Dr. Donald Jones, room 660. Seems he’s suspected of complicity
in the deaths of about a dozen patients right here on our wards, and
maybe conspiracy in a couple of other deaths in the City.”
“No kidding!” Bobby said with an impressed whistle.
“Yeah,” said Randall. “Boniface is supposed to be evaluating him
for the State’s Attorneys Office. Remember that actress, Lori –
something? Took a nosedive out of her penthouse window a few
years back? Sounds like they think maybe he gave her the PCP to
shut her up.”
“Holy ...,” Bobby cut off his expletive. “Has he said anything
today?”
“Are you kidding?” Randall said, rolling his eyes. “That looney
has been arguing with the walls all day like some crazy hopped-up
energizer bunny! The guy is well on his way to an insanity plea.”
The two men made their way along the corridor, checking on sleeping
patients as they made their change-of-shift rounds. At the door
to room 660, they stopped short and uttered a string of
expletives, as they fumbled for the keys and bolted into the darkened
cell.
Donald lay on his hospital bed, an expression of terror frozen on his
stiffening corpse.
“So much for leaving on time,” muttered Randall.
“Hey…” Bobby shouted, as a figure disappeared around the corner to the
stairwell. He charged down the hallway, Randall running after him.
“Bobby, get back here!” Randall gasped. “What’s the matter
with you?”
“Did you see that guy?” Bobby asked, searching the stairwell
frantically.
“What guy?” Randall asked. “There’s no one on this floor but you
and me.”
“No,” Bobby said. “There was a guy… gray hair, black shirt…
didn’t you see him?”
“Come on, Bobby,” Randall objected irritably. “Don’t go looney
tunes on me, man. There’s no one here but us. And the
stiff. Let’s go, we’ve got a coroner to call, and a ton of
reports to write.”
“Yeah … ok…” Bobby muttered. “Must have been my imagination.”
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A figure in a black silk shirt and gray geometric tie looked up at the
Clayton State Hospital with a malicious smile. With one last look
of pure satisfaction, he disappeared in the misty moonlit night.
| Date | Name | Comment | | | 3 Dec 2005 | Emma-Jane C. Smith | Loading...*rubs hands together* Me likes.... me likes a lot.... MUWHAHAHAHA!!!! How very evil. And I really like how he didn't get away with everything he did. And I think I'll say no to being a doc... or a nurse in the mental health field. I'd feel scared! Pity because I liked doing work experience at the community mental health health centre!!! ...scary.... Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "I love it when you get the first comment, Em!! And I'm glad you liked Room 660. There is always a day of reckoning, isn't there... And Donald just wasn't ready." | |
| 4 Dec 2005 | Debra L Kilman | Loading...To me, THIS one is creepy! How disillusioned humans can be, even at the end! Excellently written. The twists were incredible. Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thanks ever so much, Deb! High praise coming from YOU -- a writer I admire so much! Now THIS one, I had fun writing!! (Go figure...) ~deb" | |
| 4 Dec 2005 | Patricia M. D´Angelo | Loading...At first I was feeling a bit sorry for your Doctor. In a way I still do, because a wonderful chance to seek repentance was lost. You really have quite the gift for bringing your characters to life. Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thanks, Trish! I'm so glad you liked this one. Donald can't say he didn't have plenty of chances, can he? (This is one of my personal favorites.)" | |
| 15 Feb 2006 | Marijke Mahieu | Loading...From all the stories I've read on your shelf so far I must say I think this is now my favourite one. Donald is written so convincingly it's practically scary! I, too, first thought he was the "victim" in this whole thing, but that opinion changed quickly  I wonder if he even realized all the harm he once did... Wonderfully descriptive. I was glued to the screen while reading this story. Great work!  Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thanks, Marijke! This story took on a life of it's own. I knew where I wanted to go with it, but the details just kept growing and growing until I almost felt like Donald lived and breathed! Scary... Again, those little daily decisions build up and can eventually come back to haunt us if we don't decide WISELY.... ~deb" | |
| 3 Jan 2007 | Amber Silver | Loading...I absolutely adore the imagery in this piece. A great story, I read it end to end and enjoyed every word. Deborah Cullins Smith replies: "Thank you, thank you, Amber! That's high praise coming from you. You're the QUEEN of the suspenseful, dark drama! I'm so pleased that you liked my story. I hope you'll visit again soon, sweetie! And it's SO good to see you active in tHP again! You're going to put us all to shame.... Hugs, deb" | |
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