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Debra ´Shadow´ Krause

"Midnight Dreams" by Debra ´Shadow´ Krause

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A poem that I wrote for English. Got a good mark on it.
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Midnight Dreams

What do you see,
In your Midnight dreams?
Are you living in a different time?
Or perhaps you're giving the performance of a lifetime.

What do I see,
In my Midnight dreams?
I see places to explore,
Adventures to have,
People to meet.

I'm writing a book,
In my Midnight dreams.
It's a place with gaints and dragons,
Elves and dwarves,
And barbarians from the far north.

Anything goes,
In my Midnight dreams.
Red eyes with a fire within,
Blue skin like the endless sea,
Green hair to blend with the forest canopy.

What goes on,
In your Midnight dreams?
Do you name new stars in the sky?
Are you jousting with the knights?
Or are you accepting awards for your stunning performance.

What are you doing,
In your Midnight dreams?

←- Dark Dancers | Silverclaw: Chapter1 -→

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6 Mar 200245 NiTeMaRe
There is a first comment dance? i don't know it. Oh well...*gets up and does the macarena* heeeeeeeyyyy macarena!!

:-) Debra 'Shadow' Krause replies: "  That's the scariest thing I've seen all year. I think that "dance" should be banned."
18 Jun 200245 Felicor Rekesah
um... my midnight dreams consist of killing, eating people i despise... sometimes it's meeting Riverman beside the lake, sometimes skinning my ex-boyfriend..
hehehe, guess you got the picture i'm showing you..

:-) Debra 'Shadow' Krause replies: "Sounds like tons of fun. Skinning the ex-boyfriend that is ^_~"
21 Jun 200245 Sharon 'the silver butterflai' Betterton
*Does an underwhelming fourth comment foxtrot*
*sigh*... oh well.. 12 your poem is lovely and i like the flow and beat to it

:-) Debra 'Shadow' Krause replies: "Flow? Beat? What are these things you speak of?!?! Thanx for the dance, very lovely ^_~"
11 Nov 2002:-) Michael A LaFlamme
Wonderful, simple images. Sums up the whole dreaming thing pretty good.

:-) Debra 'Shadow' Krause replies: "hehe, thanx"
17 Nov 200245 Lindy 'Shanra Yoseiko Fuyutsuki' Kuepers
Lovely piece. I like the way you repeat 'Midnight Dreams' each stanza at exactly the same location, it adds something to the poem.

The rhyming scheme is a little unclear, but I'm not one to talk about that, since my poems are proof I could care less about those 12

The poem flows very well, imo and like Sharon said has a very nice beat to it. It's pictures are simple, but lovely.
I compliment you on a poem well written 2 Keep up the good work 2

:-) Debra 'Shadow' Krause replies: "Yeah, there is no rhyme scheme. I wrote this in grade 9, I feel so old now!"
26 Nov 2002:-) Emily Grist
I agree with the likings of Shanra! The repeation and everything... very beautyful! (I'n terrible at comments... I wish I had something good to say)
4 Dec 2002:-) Amanda S. McCallister
I really like this poem! It's simple, yet pleasent. Good work!
25 Dec 2002:-) Brandon Lee, The Forsaken
I'm dreaming of a flea! =D

gee must be some nightmare =/

anyways masterful poem as it sways from screen to screen and holds such a nice tender body for detail =D
30 Dec 2002:-)
Ahh.. dreams are a wonderful way to escape.. this is a lovely poem2
1 Oct 2003:-) Zan07
This is good! Me likies! ^-^
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'Midnight Dreams':
 • Created by: :-) Debra ´Shadow´ Krause
 • Copyright: ©Debra ´Shadow´ Krause. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Adventures, Barbarians, Dreams, Elves, Jousting, Sea
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
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