| 16 Jul 2004 | Larry N. Morris | *shuffles through a crude version of the first comment dance* Well artist, welcome to the library. I've just started glancing over "before the auction" and I'm impressed. If you draw better than you write, as you claim, then you must be one super artist. *makes note to check that out later* I'm off to read more of your work. *waves and steps into the elevator* | |
| 4 Oct 2004 | Keith | I love it so far........Which says much because i am very picky about the stories i read...... Keep it up and hurry up and update  cant wait for the next chapter | |
| 4 Jan 2005 | Heza86 | Great chapter! Very engaging. I'm curious about the conflict between Tavari and Rhuen. Do we find out what that's about before they both get sold off?
I really like how detailed you've been about the regions and languages in this world. I can't believe you've managed to flesh out so much when you originally started this for background for your artwork.
Sorry I just now read it. After you sent me the link to your space, I "filed" it and just now figured out where I put it. I do hope you put up another chapter soon!
Wow, this makes me want to write something, too! Tres envious... | |