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B. D. Measor

"-={ FB: Tavern Tales }=- --=The Jewel=--" by B. D. Measor

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A story being told in the Eagle Eye Tavern about a dwarf who tells a tall tale about a jewel in hopes to recruit a companion. But everyone in the tavern would rather find the jewel for themselves and thus starts a race to get the jewel before the Dwarven bard does.
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The Jewel

By: Bret D. Measor

 

Well it has been some time now but I remember it like it was yesterday.  I came from the north after traveling with a group of Orc killers and we came to this town.  I told the group that I was going to stay here for a bit and just relax kind of an early retirement.  We went to the local tavern to celebrate and that’s when I saw Clint sitting around the fireplace strumming his guitar and singing songs of adventure, the whole crowd was laughing at the site of a dwarf bard.  Even the elves got a laugh at out of it and they hardly smirk at anyone other then there own race.  I pulled up a chair near the fire pit and Clint sang a song about a jewel a very rare jewel, after he was done his song he walked over to the bar and hopped up on a seat.  His song made me curious so I followed him to learn more.  Clint had a way with words that night he told me exactly where this cave was and what to expect when you get there.  I put a coin on the table and paid for his drink and I was off on my own adventure, lets just say I was very naïve. 

 

I trekked through the Fydia forest the exact way Clint told me to go and he was right the cave was right there little did I know Clint was following me the whole way.  I approached the cave with caution cause his story said something about the jewel being guarded by a wyvern.  I saw the sleeping beast just lying there coiled around the base with the jewel on top of it.  I crept in nice a slowly so I could avoid confrontation with the beast, I had the jewel in my hand until Clint tripped on a rock and his girlish scream echoed through the cave.  At first I thought it was a banshee but there he was right behind me and behind him was the band of Orc killers and I was standing over top of a waking wyvern.  I dropped the crystal on the wyverns head and I ran for the exit, I picked up Clint on the way since he was fumbling around.  We crashed through the Orc killers who had no clue on what was going on and well lets just say those Orc Killers where a good dinner for that wyvern cause it forgot about us.

 

I ran deep in the forest until we came to a clearing and I sat the crying dwarf down.  Let me explain this, you see that jewel was a dwarf jewel and Clint used me to get it for him so he could take it back to his father the king of the dwarves and prove that a bard is just as important as a warrior.  After he blew his noise and whipped his tears we decided to go back into the cave together and see if the wyvern was full enough and sleeping again.  I peered into the mouth of the cave and there he was sleeping again, after telling Clint to stay outside I slowly made my way inside, stepping over limbs and pools of Orc blood.  The jewel was in site and once again I had my hands on the jewel, and once again Clint came running in, he shrieked again at the site of blood and dismembered bodies.  The beast woke up I tossed the jewel to Clint who fumbled it around almost dropping it.  I kicked the beast in the head and stunned it for a second, I ran hard out of the cave with Clint under my arm, and we dove into the forest.  Lucky for us a band of elves that heard the story that Clint told in the tavern came looking for the jewel also.  To there demise they went into the cave where a waking wyvern was waiting for a meal, and Clint and I fell over with laughter that we came out alive with the jewel in hand.

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26 Nov 2001:-) Lisac3
This sounds like a story that the narrator is telling to another person in a bar or something. It is all plot, with minimal character development or description. I think it would be great if you built a larger story around this one with this as a mini-story within it. It is a great story.
26 Nov 2001:-) Andrea 'Silver1' Bodel
A little sudden but not bad...
22 Nov 200245 Starry Kitten Paws
just had to add some more...
write more stories!!
MORE MORE MORE!!!

13 B. D. Measor replies: "  Comment From The Writer:
(August 1st, 2004)
I've been gone from the writing game for a few years now, and I know it is pointless to reply to this message now after so many years. BUT! I might as well just incase someone comes by and decides to leave a future message. So by that logic, I am writing a new story right now... LOL! Right now I am taking a break from writing that story to write this comment. Trust me a new one is on the way, hopefully my best story out of the three old ones."
22 Nov 200245 Starry Kitten Paws
very nice very cool VERY AWESOME i liked it a lot, sudden and surprising and jumpy, descriptive and absorbing. i loved it!!!
15 Aug 2004:-) Cesar F. A. Premont
Good plot. Just needs to be developed further. Some grammatical errors (like I'm one to talk!) I'm guessing this is connected to your other story? Keep writing! Best wishes!

:-) B. D. Measor replies: "I wrote this way back in the day, and I just re-read the story maybe a few weeks ago. I hate this story now, I wish I didn't post it because its horrible. I plan on going back and re-doing this story when I start University September. Thanks for leaving a comment man!"
18 Aug 200445 D Joelle Duran
That was so crazy it was funny! I wish I had that kind of luck. I noticed a few misapplied words, but since you just said this is pretty old I won't bother pointing them out.

That screaming, crying dwarf was quite amusing. *snickers*

:-) B. D. Measor replies: "Oh my, thanks for stopping by. Yah when I re-read this story I saw alot of mistakes as well. I really plan on re-writing this story, and add a little more to it and hopefully make it even more funny.Once again thanks for stopping by, and when I post my new story I will be sure to tell you about it =)"
8 Nov 2004:-) Lloyd Dennis Zacarias
Bret you sly dog! Why didn't you tell me you could write like this. Its very inspiring. You got anymore like this?

:-) B. D. Measor replies: "Lloyd I write better then this and I didn't think people really like my work since I don't get alot of hits around here =( Would be nice and motovating if more people did come around.
As for a story just like this... NO... but I do plan on re-writing it someday cause there is so much I would love to add to it. So when you gonna draw the picture??? Huh huh huh? *Breaks out the whip*"
9 May 201145 Anon.
Is the Wyvern called Hesper?
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