I am so sorry.... The Pyrates story just simply has no plot.... It has amazingly wicked characters, but no plot... I have tried, but think about it, there is nothing. They will find who bugged them, kill them, and move on. End of story. Ick.
*weeps* I keep writing these. I am so sorry. I think I will leave Elfwood, where all these stupid half written idiotic stories are. I'm so sorry you had to read it. Sorry. Bethany Holthof replies: "No! it was good! I liked it!!!!"
14 Sep 2002
Kim Dallaire
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No. I will be good. I will restart the Pyrates story. With plot, this time.
Thank you. You are a good commenter-person.
It is too early......
Kim. Bethany Holthof replies: "thank you! I really think that you're story had great possibilities, and look forward to seeing it again sometime."
Hey ive been doing some crazy updating at my library. Ive got one new story already up and another in the cue. Anyways it might not pass but hey after that I got another story and (takes deep breath) Ive got a few more new chapters for the stories already up. Bethany Holthof replies: "COOL!! I have'nt had time to read your stuff yet, but I will soon, and I'll write another story ASAP and get it up.... I'm a little distracted with school... *sigh*"
I think you need to update your page more. MAybe another story like dragon sparks??? Anyways it would be a great honor if you would go to my library and tell me what you think of my stories. Also you should check everyone that comments on my stuff. They are all good writers and youll enjoy their work. Anyways PLZ let me know if you update and chek out my stuff. Later!
*hudge intake of breath* YOU have a muse, too? Ahhhh, me as well! Except mine is a one-eyed penguin with a ponytail. Well, what I read so far of your work was really good. Though I haven't read all of them because ... because ... Well, because I'm reeeeeeeeally lazy. So, I'll come back another day and read them. YAY!!!
Toodles. Bethany Holthof replies: "YAY FOR MUSES!!!! I actually have mine drawn finally, he's on my loth page... thankyou!"
Bethany!! Hi!! I came to say hi! I've only read some of your stuff, but it is really good. I love it! Bybye! See you Monday.. ick. Hehehe bye! Bethany Holthof replies: "Yay!! Thankee Kate!!!!! Miss ya muchly!!! cya monday, ick..!!!!!"
25 Jan 2003
That boyfriend of Holly's
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Hey look, i came to elfwood. Whoa! Any hoo i came to make fun of ur stuff, but its too good to do that. Thumbs up. See ya between now and then Bethany Holthof replies: "LOL!!! Thanks jimmy ray!!!! YAY!!!!!"
I have a muse, too. Well, she's not a REAL muse, not one of the original nine, I mean. She's an elven redhead. Bah, never mind.
I want more poems! Write more poetry! I never have the time or patience to read stories (much less write them), that's why I love poems. Well, that and a hundred and three ather reasons. I love your poems, and want to see some more. Bethany Holthof replies: "*nods* I will write more poetry shortly... i have a few more i have yet to get on here...."
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