| 18 Sep 2003 |  PlasmaTorture | Aw...it won't let me say "This certainly doesn't su-"... Oh well. May I be the first to say, good stuff. ~constructive criticism mode~ You might want to "shake up" your descriptions (i.e. you use "that can bee seen by all" a lot in the tale of the DreadLady), as monotonous/redundant descriptions make things less interesting... Also, proofreading is always a good idea. ~leaves constructive criticism mode~ Keep up the good work, and yadda-yadda-yadda (replace yadda-yadda-yadda with the praise/keep on writing sort of thing of your choice)   Dacia 'DreadLady' Glauz replies: "Hee hee... yea... i wrote it a while ago, and have hardly gone through it. but thanks ^.^ it's really helpful!" | |
| 19 Sep 2003 | THE ALMIGHTY DUSTIN | Ur Site is Kewl ^.^ | |
| 29 Mar 2007 | alexsblackrose | I love your stuff. | |
