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Erik Hunger

"Ari´s Theme" by Erik Hunger

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Arianne is a short winged elf girl I play at AmberMUSH. This is an attempt at writing a poem from her point of view.
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Ari's Theme

moving
slow lazy spirals
wind whips up beneath pale wings
tan colored rock holding heat
sent back up and
offered to Sun.
Wing over
gliding down
giddy and graceful
in an open sky
that is not empty
black forms hover
on tall fumaroles
but leave this small one
all to me,
bright huntress
large wings
in a small part of the sky.

-Lanir
←- Wind in the Plains | Awakening -→

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6 Feb 2003:-) Alice Muffin Girl Smith
*does the slightly amazed dance of the first comment* You have a talent for imagery; I liked this. *thumbs up* *is not good at commenting on poems*
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About 'Ari's Theme':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Erik Hunger
 • Copyright: ©Erik Hunger. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Ari, Arianne, Wing, Wings, Huntress, Open, Sky
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