| 8 Jul 2000 | James K. Bowers | Colorful imagery... Must be the influence of Alaska... | |
| 16 Jul 2000 | Dean A. Glencross | These are good, I can't really say if you should work on anything though, I'm hopeless at writing poems. | |
| 18 Jul 2000 | Elfwood Writer: Dawn-Earth M. Maloney | Beautiful imagery and rhyme patterns... and I just wanted to say "Hi there neighbor! hehe, I am just next door, and I write poetry also..." | |
| 24 Jul 2000 | Dale Broda Jr | Hey... I didn't know you had a library in here ^__^ these are very VERY good poems.. ughh.. poems. They are so far out of my reach (writing wise) it's not even funny -_- I'm jealous. ^__^ | |
| 11 Aug 2000 | Jessica Ng | Nice poems, will definately come back and read the other two I missed (or was it three?) if I can actually remember how to get back here, I have such bad memory. Keep on writing and don't stop. Take care  | |