| 16 Feb 2006 |  Diana 'Artemis' Moon' Schmuckal |  Loading...I love your self portrait photo thingy! I hope you keep writing!  Averil 'Boar Warrior' White replies: "Thanks! Yeah, that was at Platform 9 and 3/4 (yes, they really have stuck a sign up and screwed half a trolley into the wall.....)" | |
| 16 Feb 2006 |  Richard Aaron Bruns | Loading... Welcome to Elfwood! If you want other people to enjoy your works, go read and comment on their stuff. That creates a link to your site, so they can find what you have written. Averil 'Boar Warrior' White replies: "Thanks, Richard! Will do!" | |
| 17 Feb 2006 |  L. Shanra Kuepers | Loading... *waves* 'ello! Welcome to Elfwood. ^-^ Hope you'll find a use for the comments I left, and apologies for pointing out things that you were aware of. ^-^ You have a lovely flair for poetry, which I stated in a general comment somewhere already, I believe. I'd give the same advice that Richard gave, except that he already did. ^-~ Hope your stay here will be productive and enjoyable! ^-^ Averil 'Boar Warrior' White replies: "Thanks you very much, and thanks for taking the time to write such excellent comments on my work!" | |
| 19 Feb 2006 | Shanra | Loading... Hardly excellent. Probably error-filled and sleep-deprived. ^-~ As I've just noted in a reply. A rather rambly reply, but I hope there's sense in it.
Glad there's some use in them though! And I'll be looking forward to seeing more works! ^-^ | |
| 23 Feb 2006 |  Ryan 'Saint' Stringer | Loading... Well, I certainly hope to see more before long - I know how the writing process can be a lengthy thing though. As I've said, I'm not really big on poetry (in fact I generally avoid it like the plague), but your entertained and kept me interested, so that is a testament in and of itself! Hope to get more feedback from you as well sometime - have a great one!  Averil 'Boar Warrior' White replies: "Thank you very much!" | |
| 9 May 2006 |  Alexandru Moisi | Loading... Ha ha that is a great picture. You are my new favourite person for that. I also like your style. I enjoyed the one about the Lady especially...even though I don't generaly like poems. I think I really liked yours because they are so easy to read and epic. Maybe you should try to bring out a book(I could really see a hardcover with some really nice ilustrations) Anyhow all the best,  Averil 'Boar Warrior' White replies: "Hehehe! Yeah, gotta love the pic. I couldn't believe it when I saw London railway actually had stuck the sign up and screwed half a trolley into the wall! No, no, I mustn't say that, I really AM going through the wall onto the platform there, honest!  lol! Thanks for the comment - yip, I hope I can get a book published at one point. I've had a few poems published already, but they aren't really suitable for the library - not fantasy." | |
| 8 Nov 2006 |  C. 'Liari' Seidel | Loading... *looks in curiously* Hmm. Guess we'll have to see what's in here. *goes to read* | |
Averil ´Boar Warrior´ White / Writings
