| 29 May 2002 |  Arianna |  Loading...I enjoyed the first 2 chapters and hope the next ones are soon to follow. I agree with the previous comment. You have excellent work besides the fact that the tense is a bit intertwined and confusing as to which setting you want the story to be in, past or present. Good work! | |
| 29 May 2002 | Stephan P. Calloway | Loading... Welcome to the Woods! (does obligatory first comment dance). This is a good start - an interesting story line. There is one thing that bothers me a little, you tend to change tense in your actions. For a while it's past tense - you're telling things that happened, then it switches to present and you're telling things as they happen. Just my opinion, but it distracts me a little from the story. But it is still goooooood stuff and I can't wait to see your additions!  Emily E. Hammond replies: "I see what you mean and I apologize for that. I'll do my best to make it make sense in the correct tense. Lol, the next chapter will be better." | |
| 30 May 2002 | Chrissy | Loading... as ive said emily this is some great (fun-filled might i add) my storys arnt this good but ill let u read some....:0) call me
-chrissy'
>^..^< MEOW | |
| 14 Jun 2002 | DeVay | Loading... Well Emily, as i've always said, your writings are great and i can't wait to hear more of them, hope to hear from you this summer, Ciao! Emily E. Hammond replies: "I know it's been along time since I've checked back here for notes. I will keep you updated DeVay when I type up my next chapter and get it on here. I hope that happens real soon!" | |
| 27 Feb 2003 |  Sarah Colley | Loading... Oh, I liked these! Especially chapter 3, it made me laugh. I could really see it while I was reading. I would like to see more  Emily E. Hammond replies: "Yes, Kaos is quite a character. " | |
| 1 Jul 2004 |  Jarrad Eve | Loading... These stories were an enoyable read. Keep up the good work! | |
| 31 Mar 2006 | Anonymous | Loading... OMG Emily its me Michelle from middle school. How are you? You need to message me back girly. I can hook you up with michiru on my sailor moon rpg...http://usagieturns.proboards101.com/index.cgi
I am haruka of course! I miss you so much..by the way I have a daughter now. Her name is Holly-marie Ember Welch. God. I hope you get this message. | |
| 28 Jun 2009 |  Sarah Woolcock | Loading... Hello. I found your house on elftown (I’m sequeena_rae on there) and followed your link here. Your writing is wonderful! Would you consider coming back to us? | |
