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Emily Poirier

"Feeding" by Emily Poirier

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This is a poem about a vampire feeding. I used my signature style of rhyme for this - HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
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Pain, searing fearing

What I'll become.

I'm almost numb to what's going on.

I'm gone from myself as I feel that reel to the smell of helplessness.

My teeth creep from my gums -

Thrumming in my mind.

I glaze over slower than I thought.

I sought peace but I've released myself to the night.

A fight; easily won.

So soon it's done.

Why couldn't it be longer?

Now the ache is stronger in my chest.

The best of how I feel is the seal of strength and the taste of nothing gone to waste -

Blood.

The thudding of my heart in my head.

They're dead in my arms.

Alarms go off in myself.

Payoff of the action of satisfaction.

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26 Jun 2008:-) Heidi Hecht
Interesting poem. I didn’t see much in the way of a steady rhyme scheme, but I think a poem doesn’t really need much in the way of rhyme if it’s good enough. It came off more as a person turning into a werewolf or something (fighting what sounds like a physical as well as mental transformation) but that’s cool. *First comment dance*

:-) Emily Poirier replies: "Well, as far as the rhyming goes, like the next word rhymes with the last one with a few odd-balls here and there...
As far as the transformation goes, who ever is the vampire doesn’t understand why they all of a sudden have the need to kill and a thirst for blood and it scares them that they will just let it happen."
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'Feeding':
 • Created by: :-) Emily Poirier
 • Copyright: ©Emily Poirier. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Feeding, Vampire, Poem
 • Categories: Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 177

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