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Erica Lea Martin

"Hidden ~poem~" by Erica Lea Martin

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This is a love poem...*shutters* I don't normally do these kind of poems, so I hope this goes over pretty well. It's kinda hard to explain, so check it out.
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Hidden
Under the bush
Beyond the grass
Down the tube
Past the magick
Inside the box
Deep in the mystery
There you lie
Hidden in my heart

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21 Apr 200045 Gabriella Jönsson
=) Sweet...Kind of corny and naive, but that's what makes it sweet, and I do think love should be corny and naive at times. It brings smiles, and smiling is very important!
9 May 2000:-) Chad 'Natu Visu' R. Quackenboss
Heh..nice touch of the ever elusive "luv". Short, simple and sweet, reminiscent of the first crush type love.
4 Jun 200045 Drew
Hi, Me again. I like this poem. Even though you dont do this kind of poem, it is really good.
5 Jun 2000:-) Andrea Nichole Walker
I like it too. 2 I can't name what it is..., but me likes.
24 Aug 200145 Lorelei
"deep in the mystery" I LOVE THAT LINE! I'm sorry for shouting, but I do. It just sounds so cool. This is a great little poem, very sweet. AND IT HAS THAT LINE!
19 Mar 2003:-) Stacey M. Schmude
Finally someone who spells "magick" correctly. 2
4 Jun 200345 Nina Macias
Hey this is a really sweet poem keep writing poems
23 Sep 200345 BIBo
This peom is.... so homosexual I would smash the book and burn it if I could
28 May 2008:-) Heather A Nash
^^^.... how is it homosexual?...... whatever, I love it!
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About 'Hidden ~poem~':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Erica Lea Martin
 • Copyright: ©Erica Lea Martin. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Love, Couples, Together, Hidden, Sweet, Girl, Guy, Under, Beyond, Past, Down
 • Views: 267


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