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Leigh *Shwin* Erickson

"Sky´s Guardians" by Leigh *Shwin* Erickson

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This isn't complete. Ok, now that you know that... I just put it up 'cause i want to know if it's worth finishing... i mean, i'll finish it regardless, but do you want more of it posted? This is a little ditty that will end happy in challenge by Paul... it's taking me forever... i'm not one to write happy stories *grin* so don't expect much from it...

in retrospect, this one is based off of the CC team at my school.. they're my heroes... it's what little I could do to repay them for all they've done for me even though they'll never know it or know that this is here, but it is... and it's dedicated to them.
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He walked with an easy grace akin to a great cat. His pace was smooth and uninterrupted, his stance relaxed and calm. A blue t-shirt covered his lithe back and shoulders, it’s fabric dancing lightly with his movement. He wore jeans and shoes that were well worn as was obvious by the thinning spots that were scattered on their surfaces. It was easy to see what his passion was.



He was a runner.



But one glance into his eyes gave the impression that he was no mortal, no ordinary runner from this world. They were pale in hue and seemed to glow especially as the sun’s light fell on them, catching their colours and refracting into a thousand shades of blue. Deep pools of green elegantly dotted the silvery surface and yet a hidden blue played in their depths. They were mysterious and beautiful, like windows into the very sky.v

His face was sharp and knowing, yet gentle. His eyes, vaults without depth, took in all around him, observing everything with a distant yet distinct interest. He walked with such an ease about him that even the most fluttery or faint-hearted felt reassured in his presence.



But where he walked it would seem even he would stumble; even he would be afraid. It was a high cliff side which fell away into the frothing nothing of the sea before sunrise. There was no light to show the height of the cliff, but he had walked it often enough, he knew. To fall was more than certain death.



But he was not afraid.



Easy steps lead him further and further along the cliff’s edge as the black of night lost it’s hue to a deep blue, the first sign of the nearing sunrise. Faintly, the outline of the cliff’s edge became visible, betraying its shape now to every eye. It gathered itself and thrust forth into a jagged outcrop, a peninsula of sorts. Here the wind blew fiercely and as such, no life grew there, the wind having reduced the soil to nothing.



It was here that he stopped, here that he stood, wind whipping his shirt against his wiry frame; yet he stood strong, seemingly immune to the onslaught of the furious current. The sun would soon rise, he could see, by the pale and delicate lavender and rose hues lining the horizon.



He stood a little longer, watching the horizon with the same distant interest, waiting for the sun to rise. The sky faded to a rich green, then a fiery orange which gave way to a glimmering gold, he waited, watching.



And then it rose; the sun in its fiery glory was revealed on the gleaming horizon, casting a new light along the cliffs and filling the sea with metallic shimmers. He smiled, closing his sky filled eyes to the blinding star, raising his arms and reveling in the purity of the first rays of light that brushed his side of the earth.



And then he ran.



With long strides that carried him smoothly he fairly flew towards the cliff’s edge. Were any around to view the spectacle their breath would have caught in his or her throat that such a fine man, in the prime of life, would be hurtling at a godlike speed towards a sheer drop of hundreds of feet. They would have cried out in anguish as he launched his body with one final push from the cliff side; screamed as he began a now unstoppable free fall into the boiling depths below.



He fell. And yet he smiled; laughing at the wind which tore now at his shirt and whipped through his hair.



And then he flew.



Great wings the colour of the sky, all but invisible against the blue spread from his back and along his outstretched arms, breaking his fall and lifting him higher. Wings that were the children of the sun and the sky, breathed into life with the caress of the wind and the warmth of the sun; wings earned with the right of his guardianship; wings of the firmament; wings of the sky.



He was Rion, Guardian of the East, one of the elite few charged with the keep of the firmament. He took his task seriously, watching over the heavens in their awesome glory with a wary and well trained eye. He rose in graceful circles, ever higher, never wavering, flying with a practiced ease and a simple elegance that would have brought tears to the eye of anyone watching.



But no one ever saw, he made certain of that. For all his status in heaven, he led a simple life on earth. Like the others, he had been offered a dwelling among the angels of heaven in unimaginable luxury and comfort, but he refused. Many were confused by his decision, but the quite peace with which he lived his life assured any who passed him that he was wholly content living in the rugged beauty of Earth.



The sun was still low in the east and he sighed with deep content, knowing he could fly into eternity if he desired. Gentle breezes played under his wings, lifting and dropping him in an elemental game of tag. He closed his eyes, feeling the gentle warmth of the brightening star caressing his new-born wings, feeling the rush of the wind and the damp of the sea. He let the wind take him, allowing it to lead him where ever it wished; perfectly at peace in its shifting embrace.



Another guardian came into view, far on the western horizon. Unlike Rion, he appeared to be in a great rush, the sun glinting against his wings. They were a vivid green tinged with iridescent patches that shimmered like thin chips of mica set within the emerald. Rion frowned slightly recognizing this, by his wings, to be Dalanar, the swiftest of the guardians, who, despite this status, rarely hurried unless it was something urgent. Rion shrugged out of the wind’s embrace and flew towards Dalanar, wondering why the Northern Guardian was in such a rush.



They were within shouting distance soon; Rion was second only to Dalanar for speed, and even Dalanar was hard pressed to pass him.



“Ri!” Dalanar’s shout reached Rion’s ears; he hurried even faster when he heard the distress in Dalanar’s voice.



“What is it? What happened?” His sky chipped eyes flashed concern.



They drew up along side each other, Rion flying in the direction that Dalanar had been traveling, letting the Northern Guardian sink into a slightly more comfortable pace, which, though comfortable to both Rion and Dalanar, was a speed some of the Guardians could only dream of achieving. While they were flying close, Rion took a mental stock of his fellow Guardian. Dalanar’s emerald wings were impressive to view, perfect in every way allowing Dalanar his amazing speed. His hair, like Rion’s, was short, but it was a lighter brown. His eyes held the same sky within them, but of a different mood being a more somber grey tinged with gentle flecks of green. But the eyes were darker than usual today and the wings strained almost. “What is it?” Rion asked again.



He called us.” Dalanar answered.



Rion’s eyes widened, “H-He? What happened? Why?”



“There is one who dreams.”



Rion’s eyes widened, “Have Mat and Ceraph been alerted?” He was alarmed; it wasn’t every day, in fact it wasn’t every life time that a candidate was found; and Dalanar appeared very worried.



“That’s why I came to the East. We’re the fastest, I figured we could split up. You could fetch Ceraph and I’ll find Mat.”



“Mat’ll be a real bear, Dar,” Rion almost smirked, “The Western Guardian at sunrise, now that’s a picture!”



“She’s dying Ri.”



The flawless flight halted as Rion’s wings snapped in by his sides, spreading out only as the guardian began to fall. “She’s what?”



Dalanar turned, grey eyes near black. “You heard me.” His voice was soft.



“How much time do we have?”



“God alone knows. She’s unpredictable, as are her circumstances, but judging by how far along she is, not much.”



“I’ll get Ceraph. Where are we meeting?”



“Pelanath Hall.”



“When does He want to start?”



A smirk entered Dalanar’s desolate eyes, “If I told you that’d be no fun.” He smiled, “Race you...”



Rion grinned, “Before zenith? You’re on!”



In a flash of blue and emerald, they flew at speeds only dreamt of, pushing even themselves farther and harder than they ever thought they could; for although their meeting had ended in jest, they knew the seriousness of the circumstances. This was no mere race, guardian against guardian; this was a race against fate, and a race against time.



~@~



Dalanar flew with a great ease, making his near impossible pace look effortless. In truth he was pushing himself to his very limit, hoping he wouldn’t be too late. He had gained a precious glimpse of their candidate and knew the condition she was in. If they were going to keep this dreamer, he was going to have to round up the Guardians fast. He only hoped that Rion understood.



The sky darkened as he flew to the Western realm, making him cringe; Mat was not known to be in a jovial mood when disturbed so soon after his shift ended. The Guardians worked in pairs such that there were always two or more in the sky; North and East characteristically worked together leaving West and South to be paired in the other shift. The Northern and Southern Guardians had to be flexible, often working half shifts so they were paired with both East and West. Rion and Mat had well set schedules, Rion from sunrise to sunset and Mat from sunset to sunrise, namely when the eastern and western hemispheres were lit. Mat was well set into his schedule. He enjoyed his break. Dalanar sighed, knowing where to find him.



“Mat?” he cupped his hands to his mouth and called, “Come out! We’ve been called!”



There was much grumbling and movement from the area surrounding Dalanar. A head, eyes still squinting in sleep yet creased with a deep frown, made itself visible from the hidden refuge of an air pocket in which it was resting. “By who?” Mat’s voice, though slurred with sleep, was sharp and annoyed.



“I think only one person can call a meeting of all the Guardians, Mat. Who do you think it is?”



The eyes opened a little in recognition, but the frown still didn’t lift from them, “So?” he replied, giving a great yawn.



Dalanar sighed, the reaction he knew Mat had been aiming for. Although the Western Guardian gave the impression of not caring, it was just a guise; he played along, “He’s assembling all the Guardians, cardinal, secondary, seasonal... everyone!”



“Why?” Two arms came forth from the air and Mat rested his chin on his outstretched hands, trying to look bored and doing a pretty good job at it.



It was Dalanar’s turn to yawn, “You trying to get me worked up, Mat? It’s not going to work you know...” He flashed the disgruntled Guardian a grin.



Mat pulled the rest of his frame from the air pocket, laughing. “Oh all right, Dar, I’m coming. What happened?” He perched on the edge of the pocket, great scarlet wings falling in a sleep mangled mess by his sides.



Dalanar’s somber eyes met Mat’s warm brown ones, “Ri and my page discovered what she thought was a potential dreamer; He found her to be a candidate.”



“A candidate?” All sleep was washed from the Western Guardian’s face. He pushed himself from his perch allowing his wings to spread to their full span to catch him, hovering then and staring at Dalanar unbelievingly.



“Yeah and she’s not doing so well. We need to hurry.”



Mat launched himself forward and Dalanar fell beside him. “What’s wrong with her?”



“He notified me first, so I got to see her. I think she’s dying; she really doesn’t look so good.”



Mat paled picking up his already strained pace, “Dying? From what?”



“I can’t say. I don’t know. But if it isn’t her body that’s dying, it’s what’s making her a potential Guardian that is.”



“That’s bad. That’s very bad.” Mat seemed to enjoy stating the obvious, but Dalanar ignored it.



“Yeah. We don’t have much time.”



“Rion getting Ceph?”



“Yeah.”



Mat nodded.



“Where’re we meeting?”



“Pelanath hall.”



“Pelanath?!?”



“He was the one who called us, only fitting we should meet where he is.”



“The last time I was there,” Mat sighed, “Was when the pages were assigned. It’s been awhile.”



“I could say the same.”



“He give you a time?”



Dalanar shrugged, “As soon as we could possibly get there. Now would be ideal.” He said, eyeing the steadily rising sun.



“I see. Rion know this?”



“Yeah, that’s why I sent him to get Ceph, he’ll hurry.”



“Then let’s fly.”



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21 Nov 200345 D Joelle Duran
*does a first comment dance*

Wow--this reminds me why it is I so love your writing. Your descriptions are so gorgeous they come alive in the mind. You seem to really like dawn by the seashore, since it appears repeatedly in your works. Alas, dawn on the shores of Lake Superior is the closest I've ever gotten =(

I certainly hope you post more of this...I want to find out more about this 'world.' I like the idea of the guardians and how you describe them.

Couple of little things. In the first section you've got a few it's that should be its. And in the third paragraph a little typo: "into the very sky.v "
Also "Great wings the colour of the sky, all but invisible against the blue spread from his back and along his outstretched arms, breaking his fall and lifting him higher." I'd insert a comma between "blue" and "spread." For a moment when I read it, I thought his back was blue!

Once again, this is outstanding! I hope you continue...and that you succeed in crafting another tale with a 'happy' ending =)

1 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "Thank you!! Thank you so very very much!! Err... evil typos *grin* thanks for pointing those out for me *bows* no.. his back be not blue... *grin* I'll have to redo that when i update this... thank youfor your interest! yay! now i have a reason to update more!"
28 Nov 2003:-) Becca Lusher
Oh this is beautiful, it's grown even more so since i last saw it. I love the bit with Mat pulling himself out of an air pocket - cute *grins*

As always truly gorgeous descriptions which are so vivid. You had better write more and put it up here! People deserve to see your hard won craft, i know it's a pain to write *grins* but i'm sure you'll get around making it too happy somehow.
So yep post more my dear!

Interesting mix of characters coming in here, i shall await more...no forcey though ^_~

1 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "oooh!! thank you Becca!!! *feels special again* yay! I'm so glad you like it!! Characters... yes... there will be a few more and I'm basing them loosely (did I spell that right?) off people... so they have personalities.... sorta... I no know the people all that well... but it's fun... yes... I know roughly how this is going to go... might be long... might be short... depends on how detailed I go... well thanks so much for reading and I'll be sure to get more up soon! *hugs again*"
1 Dec 2003:-) Kate 'The Pirate' Riley
hey come on like I have told Bethany X. 'Fork Master' Lewis and Travis 'Costume' Kirby it is very very cruel to show people these cliffhangers, wait till they get into it and then say 'hey dunno if I'm gonna let you see what happens now!' Not fair! and hey just one thing I don't get. Is the one who's dreaming actually dying? I know someone was dying and dammit I wanna know why and when and where! On a less childish note the description of Ri running and flying is beautiful. It mixes perfectly with the casual conversation in that it gives a very vivid and very believable image of two friends having a conversation...whilst flying lol. Please at least post the next bit, like I know you prob have and I just haven't looked lol. Anyway if you haven't and I don't find it tell me when you update xx

14 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "*whistles innocently* it's a different style! i don't like it! but people seem to, so i'm beginning to be comvinced that i should put more up *nods* is she dying? *shifty eyes* yeah. Would Dar lie? I think not. I'm talking with the person he's based off of right now actually *grin* no, he wouldn't lie... she's dying *grin* what am i talking about anyway. I'm glad you like it. It's hard to write right now, but i'll get more up as sson as i can and will tell you yes. Thanks so much for reading and for your comments!!!"
21 Dec 2003:-) Gabs Béland
Wow! This is really something leigh! I like it alot, especially the last line.."then lets fly"...
And the descriptions! You can see the characters so vividly! You're very good at that! 2
*fourth comment jig*

2 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "*switches number of comment in Gabs' comment* *whistless innocently*

THANKS GABS!!!! Hee hee! i'm so glad you liked it and i'm so glad you can see my characters! yay! thanks so much for reading and liking... i really appreciate it!"
27 Dec 2003:-) Alice Muffin Girl Smith
~ ‘A blue t-shirt covered his lithe back and shoulders, ***it’s*** fabric dancing lightly with his movement.’ you. You blended perfectly from the serene description of Rion into the tense mood brought on by the first sight of Dalanar... Now simply continue this, and I’ll have nothing to complain about. ^_^

1 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "the random 'v' is from me copy pasting html tags... oops...

thanks for reading! improve from your first reading? my e-mail's still dead... i wouldn't know hee hee... wow... to think i like this one almost least... and yet people love it... i don't understand, but i do thank you... you flatter me... *HUGS* thanks so much Muffin Smith!!!!!"
27 Jan 2004:-) Nastasha Vanessa Ostrom
Wow!!! A happy story! This amazes me, truely... you NEVER write happy stories... though I must admit, so far it is not THAT happy... lots of suspension, fun fun! I DO think you should post more when you write more... I started getting into this story only to find that you were (obviously) not done. So post more when you've got it, or email it to me!

1 Leigh *Shwin* Erickson replies: "hee hee.. thanks!!! This one will be a work in progress for a time I think... yep... *grin* I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! It will be happy yes... *grin* Thanks to Paul I have that challenge to break the genre mode hee hee... I'm so glad you liked it!! thanks for reading!! *HUGS*"
23 Jun 2005:-) B. Layne Weaver
*waves* Hi, Leigh! ^_^ Yay! Another story! Another story! *bounces excitedly* Much too hyper for only having 5 hours of sleep...
whoooooo! {{grins}} happy hyper good yes^_^

"A blue t-shirt covered his lithe back and shoulders, it’s fabric dancing lightly with his movement." No apostrophe in 'its' Great description of that fellow, though. Rowr!
oops... thanks... freak typo i'm fond of... {{chuckles}} he's based on a guy i had a crush on at the time^_~ thanks^_~

"Easy steps lead him further and further along the cliff’s edge as the black of night lost [it’s] hue to a deep blue, the first sign of the nearing sunrise." No apostrophe in "its"
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"It was here that he stopped, here that he stood, wind whipping his shirt against his wiry frame; yet he stood strong, seemingly immune to the onslaught of the furious current. The sun would soon rise, he could see, by the pale and delicate lavender and rose hues lining the horizon." No nits here. I just love that whole paragraph! It's so beautiful... the description of the runner, of the coming sunrise... I could almost feel the wind. Beautiful, Leigh!
{{blushes}} thanks...

"Many were confused by his decision, but the [quite] peace with which he lived..." "quiet"?

"...allowing it to lead him where ever it wished..." "wherever" is one word
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“She’s dying Ri.” comma before "Ri"
thank you...

“Pelanath?!?” In real writing, all these punctuation points aren't acceptable. Better is to italicize it and use one question mark. "Pelanath?" That way, the italics give the urgency in the voice, while you're able to use the question mark. Don't feel bad, I did the same thing once.. .Joelle showed me the error of my ways. ^_~
{{grins}} ditto... must've been before though... but thank you!!

Ah, that really was wonderful, Leigh. I hope you continue it very soon! I'd love to read more! And when will Natham and Morn be getting a story? ^_~
{{scuffs toe}} i should finish this i really should... i know how it ends now... i lived it^_~ heh... eventually i hope... morn's going to make an appearance in joelle's story if i ever get that written...

*hugs* Bye!{{hugs back}} thanks for that lovely comment and for reading... really really 'preciate, do^_^
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'Sky's Guardians':
 • Created by: :-) Leigh *Shwin* Erickson
 • Copyright: ©Leigh *Shwin* Erickson. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angel, Dreamer, Dreams, Guardian, Runner
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
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