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"Pure Song (poem)" by Esther SP. Buhrman

SciFi/Fantasy text 21 out of 25 by Esther SP. Buhrman. ←Previous - Next→

Inspired by love and the 'Blade Runner' soundtrack :)

←- Solitary Confinement (Poem) | The Mirror of Apollo* -→

Pure Song

I see you

And the world fades around me

Watercolours smudged and merging in your rain

Provocatively lithe and lazily golden

You dance to a music box’s melody

I take your hand

And spin within you in this carousel of rainbows

Moulding myself into your haziness

I fall into your kiss

Revel in its warm depths

Where I swim its smooth sweetness in abandon

Fragmented reality melt and blur

In a pure song that has no memory

What once was broken

Now is whole

In this enchantment I sleep in darkness

And dance away with you

Into the light

←- Solitary Confinement (Poem) | The Mirror of Apollo* -→

Date	Name	Comment
26 Aug 2000	LesRais	Loading... OOoh! That's a beautiful dreamy scene that one...probably my fave scene in 'Labyrinth'. The music track of that scene is called 'hallucination'...
26 Aug 2000	Moni'ca 'The Fly' Flythe	Loading... Wooah...reminds me of my boyfriend, Itchy! I mean..totally! Also, it brought vauge memories of David Bowie and the "Bubble Scene" in Labrynth. FANTASTIC!
14 Sep 2000	Ruth Elizabeth Petroff	Loading... the image that formed in my head when i read this poem was just absolutely beautiful. the way you used language and description :hakes her head:: wow. it was really good. i'm in awe. awesome job...
15 Nov 2000	James K Bowers	Loading... "Watercolours smudged and merging in your rain"... Another fine example of your ability to make words become more than words...
3 Jan 2001		Loading... Have to agree with James. That line is beautiful. So many beautiful words in this one.
16 Jan 2001	Emily Kirsch	Loading... Pure is, indeed, the only word I can think of to describe it... for you've used them all in this excellent poem. -sighs dreamily.-
26 Jan 2001	Luc Greven	Loading... Bladerunner and love? That's such an... odd juxtaposition. Anyways, it lead to a very well written poem, as usual. Keep it up.It was the actual music soundtrack, namely the song 'Love Theme' that inspired this poem, rather than the movie itself...
9 Oct 2001	Felicor Rekesah	Loading... Oh, gods! as always your work brings out a feeling of longing.
28 May 2002	Navah Rosensweig	Loading... Wow! This poem sings - you've captured song! ;:grins;: Okay, I know I didn't say much just now, but this poem sort of defies comments. Suffice it to say that I like it quite a lot.
19 Sep 2002	Lindy 'Shanra' Kuepers	Loading... jaw drops This is AMAZING, simple amazing. It's so beautiful and dreamy and I just totally don't know what to say other then that I love it. I just don't know where to start or how to say...
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