"Our Generations Faery" by Evren W.

*first comment jiggle*
I quite like this faery, the large antennae and wings are cool ^^ Big Hair Rocks!
lol, "so this generation" I don't think there are enough peicings
Her tattoo is quite nice, and the typical thoughtlessness a lot of teenagers this day and age are putting into designs that permanently on their bodies

This is very nice for ten minutes work, well done.

Evren W. replies: "Why thank you, yea I agree there should have been more piercings. I shall keep that in mind for future refrence.8-)Also, you are so right! Big hair does rock I love big hair. Hehe. Thanks for the comment. "

I just love the wings!!!!
What kind of shampoo does she use?

Evren W. replies: "Just for Faeries... good shampoo for humans to use too... =) Thanks for the comment! "

Yep definateially our genaration.^_^ The wings are really cool and she looks like she has a real attitude.^_^ Rock on!!^_^

Evren W. replies: "Thankies, I like the wings as well. =)"

She looks like she has attitude! I like this piece - especially the wings!

Evren W. replies: "She does have attitude! And she aint afraid to show it either. hehe. Anyways, I like her wings too.. I thought this was pretty good considering I didn't spend much time on it. Thanks for you nice words. =)"

This is my opinion the best drawing youve done,my favorite face.

Evren W. replies: "Really? Well thankies, maybe I should rush through my drawing from now on hehe. Thanks again for your kindness!"

You'll either love or hate me for this comment, but it's constructive criticism time! Yay! First I'd like to start by addressing the fact that I do like the design and the picture over all, that said let's tear it down shall we?

First, the neck is a bit too long. However it is totally conceivable for a person to have a longer than usual neck so this may just be me.

Her arms are too short. When fully extended an arm should reach to mid thigh. Her hands are smaller than they should be too.

Your line art needs to be steadied. This is a hard thing to do. I myself have shakey hands so it's hard to keep a line straight. I find just taking more time and going very slow keeps my hand steady.

Now I like the face it's well done and I like her outfit. I must wonder, how long does it take her to wash all of that hair. Also, when she shampoos her hair... does she read the instructions?

Evren W. replies: "Phew! Thanks for pointing all of that out too me. Though I was very aware of the arms, they are so short hehe and I am too lazy to fix them. Also now that I look at the pic her neck is too long.. haha shes part giraffe... uhh didn't I mention that hehe jk. I agree that the lines need work, though this really was just a doodle so I'm not gunna lose sleep over it. Also, thankies... I like her face too. Hmm to answer your question... since she has wonderful "just for faeries" it only takes her about 3 days to wash her hair. Ahh the joys of have long hair! Also, no she doesn't read the instructions, grrrr shampoo bottle direction.. hehe sorry about that. Anyways, thanks for critique, I don't hate you for it, I appreciate it!... *Gives pancake for wonderful critism*"

I love her attitude, it fits you so. By the way, don't forget to rinse, lather, repeat! Also, being someone who once had hair nearly that long I can tell you the washing doesn't take that long, but blow drying will take her weeks!

Evren W. replies: "LOL right you are... she washed her hair last week and she is still blowdrying as we speak! err uhm or comment lol. Hehe *Gives more pancakes* =)"

Well i will say to listen to Mathis advice (he knows what he is talking about) but i will add a little... when you get an idea sketch it down then go find a friend and get them to pose for you (preferably not in a overly public space cos that really can get a bit inbarassing after a while, i know) and use you friend to get the proportions right. after a while you then can get really good figures

Evren W. replies: "Thanks alot for the tip, I will do that if I ever feel the need for sketching... I never really intended for this to be some masterpiece, but maybe i could work with it some and try to repost it or whatever. Thanks for the comment! =)"

I wish I could have that hair !
but I think the wings are my favourite part,anyway.

Evren W. replies: "Yea I wish I had hair like that... maybe in another life. Glad you like the wings though. Thanks for the comment!"