hi! first of all: i was really surprised when i read your age. when i was 13 i wasn't able to describe things so good like you did. i really enjoyed your stories a lot!
oh, and by the way, i guess the problem with choosing names is really common. i have the same.... but i started to write down many names for many days in many books (oh well, you know what i mean... )and now every time when i am writing a story and i need a name i don't have to sit on my desk for hours, hitting my head against the wall and the table and think desperately for names.i only have to open one of my books. believe me, this makes the whole work so much easier!!!

Finally, someone else who is 13!

Your stories aren't good, and you have no potential. Sorry for being so blunt, but you gotta hear it somewhere. It's crueller not to tell you. Though I suppose the age MAY have something to do with it...
Also, I do not think it was very nice of you to publicise it on a huge site like this that your friends were in bad situations at one point. Even if you used no names, I'd be really annoyed if a friend did that to me.
I'm sorry if this comment seemes harsh, but honey, you gotta hear it somewhere

Huh, i've seemed to of stumbled into your parts of the woods. Oh well, you've got some decent stories here anyway