Greetings Samantha and welcome! What I have read so far of your story is very intreging! How 'bout some order to this scroll though? I know, easier said than done. Anyway, good job!!!Hey! thanks for being my first reveiwer! I've fixed the order problem...I think

Welcome to the library! You can have more than one welcome, right? Anyways, I read your story and the plot is pretty good. Although I was wondering, why did she get the digital eye thing instead of a regular eye? And the doctor doesn't seem to be very nice to her, especially since she called her a "freak". There are other parts I think would be good to expound upon more but you have a good start here! Keep writing I'm still working out the bugs in this, but most of that will be covered in Scatter's story. Which I'm working on. And most of the Doctors on Kyltara hate their jobs...not to mention patients

Yeah! No. Yeah... No! The order thing isn't fixed! -hangs on her.- Fix it! Pleeeaaase... -whines.- Yeah, yEAH! You're a cool artist, and 'm here -beams.- To see if you're just as good a write! (Though I really, really don't have ANY doubts that you aren't a good writer, 'cause if you tell tales as well as you colour, we might have to make some kind of announcement for the new queen of the world or somethin'...) -claps for her!- Three ElfWood houses! -snickers. hugs her.-*blushes* I think queen of the world is over doing it a little...and i'm not sure what u mean about the order cause it looks alright to me! ah well, thanx for leaving coments...NICE ppl leave comments...*hints to everyone else who comes here*