|26 Apr 2003|| Camorra11|
Read immortal destiny 1,2, and 3 tonight coming back tomorrow, maybe, to give it another shot! I'm captivated! Hahah great stuff...Very nice flowing language and intriguing characters, tho the setting is lacking somewhat..Italy in 1803 must have been beautiful, and you should try to bring some of that out..However, if u've never been to italy or that isn't really the focus of ur story than it probably isn't important..Excellent stories! Patricia Faye Ulrich
replies: "Yeah, Being in Italy isn't that important, I wanted to focus mainly on the people until they moved to their next destination. I'm glad you like them!"
|31 Jul 2003|| L. 'Shanra' Kuepers|
Oh, Patricia. Some description in the setting might still be a good idea.
But mainly that's me loving to describe things as best as I can. Good pratice for increasing vocabulary
As you prolly know, I can't do much work on Elfwood right now. Doing a lot of re-writing though. I just wanted to drop by and check up on your shelf. I'm sure ID will be a great story once it's finished and I'll be glad to read it in full someday. ^^ Patricia Faye Ulrich
replies: "Thank you Shanra. I hope that while you are so busy that you are at least having fun. Thanks for taking the time to check in on me."
|31 Jul 2004|| Jessie Xeno Kitsune Hoesing|
Hey Tricia! Remember me?
Long time gone, I know I know, I have plenty of reading to do to catch up on your work! I know that for sure. I wrote a single chapter to Waltz when I had time and it's up now! Woo. Took forever!
Have a good one!
|16 Dec 2005|| L. Shanra Kuepers|
Oh, dear. So long without comments... Can't have that! Soo... what's this I've heard about new stories? I do hope you're still going to continue the ones already up. ^-^ Or have finished them now.
Let me know when they're up! I can't promise you that I'll get to reading them soon (as said in the reply to your comment), but they'll be on the list and if I keep working like I am (or was) then I'm sure I'll get there in no time at all. ^-^
|25 Dec 2005|| L. Shanra Kuepers|
*waves* Happy Holidays, Patricia! ^-^ May they be wonderful. ^-^
|6 Apr 2007|| Jesper Cbg|
You got some well written original pieces of work here. I especially like The Forfeiture. It got some depths in it that many stories lack.
Another thing: I don't draw much nowadays, and when I do it might just be something else than fantasy. You mind if I get some inspiration from your work? Not that I see what you could do to stop me...
Good work! But update soon and give us more. =)
|9 Apr 2007|| Katherine Deros|
Awesomness!! I've read every piece there. I lurve Immortal destiny. Your writing is so powerful, the feelings seem so real...It's a blast of emotions throughout the whole story. PLeaSE!! tell me when you'll update!!! I really enjoy your stories. Keep it up, and watch for typing errors
Although I am totally aware of what multiple hours of writing/typing cause, I tend to lose my concentration of the story over these ^.^'
Heh, anyways. Cheers!!
|7 Jan 2008|| Alan Welch|
Thank you for your kind comments on my art work.
Now that I have discovered you, I must read some here.
|22 Jan 2010|| Jessie Xeno Kitsune Hoesing|
Holy crap, when did you get married?!??! Congrats btw ^_~
Your old friend, Jessie ^-^
|5 Feb 2010|| Jessie Xeno Kitsune Hoesing|
I plan on re-reading all your stuff. It’s been years since I have but I remember loving it all ^-^ So ya know, it’ll be fun!