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Natalie Paquette

"Dance of the Fae" by Natalie Paquette

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Two old role-playing characters of mine, Lorelei and Tammy (sister faeries) inspired this poem - although flighty and given in to silly indulgences, they're both quick-witted and fearless. I'm not sure if the end of my poem really brings that out, but... read it and see if you can figure out what I was trying to get at. -- Hint removed! (feel free to ask via leaving a comment if you can't figure the end of it out.)
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A pristine vision beckoned, beckoned,

Shadowy digits curling in the darkness of the night.

Lupine songs of sorrowed longing

Rang off the trees to tremble in the moonlight.

Crystalline glimmers, shimmers, sparkles,

Shone high above in the velveteen sky;

A tremble, a tremor, leaves parted aside

To allow two faeries passage to fly.

They dipped and they danced and they twirled in the air,

Coiling their fingers about the shadowy mist;

A sudden growl, a roar, a cry -coiled in shadows,

A demon lay, twitched, hissed.

A single tear marred the perfection of

Porcelain cheeks; a murmuring sigh of the fae in the air;

The devil-spawn laughed, a huge toothy grin-

But the faerie turned, giggled - didn't care.

And so they ran, among the stars

Footsteps so light and dark and deep-

The demon lay waiting, crouching, hiding-

The faerie now had a curved tooth to keep.


Who, now, was the one to cry?

←- Child of the Night | Fear (Introduction) -→

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13 Apr 200345 Kylia A. Taspin
Yes yes, I agree, the clue takes away from the poem. I love it. Very celestial. I especially like the line where they stole his tooth. Take that!
I'll go now.
~~Kylia

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "Thanks. 12 I think the next time I update (which may not be for awhile), I'll take the clue out of the description. ^-^ "
13 Apr 2003:-) Nicole Laura Antonia Rodovsky
*First comment dance!!* Ooh! I claim zis poem for...dancing!

Excellent work, I like the story told within. Lorelei and Tammy, eh? By chance you haven't read any Robert Heinlein have you? Say, _Time Enough for Love_?

Just one little nit-pick...I don't think you should have given us the clue. 12

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "Nope .. haven't read any. I first came up with Lorelei, then figured she needed an older sister and a brother... Tamitha and .. Aiden, was it? .. just sort of... came into my head. ^-^ Originally, my sister was going to play Aiden while I played the two sisters... but we never got around to it. Ah well. ... Hmm.. maybe I should remove the clue from the description...? 12 Thank you for commenting!"
14 Apr 2003:-) Caitlyn M. Milford
*claps* I like it! Very.....hmm, sparkly! Pretty, and it has a nice sorta flow. *feels stupid because she didn't read the comment first* I just went to the poem...so the clue didn't affect me! Good job, keep it up! *goes off to read the rest of Natalie's stories*
14 Apr 200345 Sheri McCarville
I likes it! Keep up the good work!
9 Oct 200345 Carolyn Anderson
Im jealous of your eloquence. This is so beautiful... sigh*

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "^-^ You're just as eloquent as I am, Carolyn - if not more so. You're just a typical artist and you can't see it. 12"
12 Mar 200445 Dez
This is very cool.

I don't usually like poetry, but this is really good!

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "Thank you. 2"
6 May 2004:-) Tiffany Hayes
I'm enjoying your poems. I love the night visualization. I love night time.

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "Thank you. 2 I love the night - it holds so much more promise, more mystery, than the garish light of day. And it's easier to write about because of that. ^-^"
17 Aug 2004:-) James Milligan
Heh. Bloody Faeries. Always putting socks on teeth when no one's looking or taking them when someone is. This is fun, and light - even though it might not seem that way at first. Wonderful work, as usual.
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About 'Dance of the Fae':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Natalie Paquette
 • Copyright: ©Natalie Paquette. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Faeries, Monster, Demon, Night, Forest
 • Categories: Faery, Fay, Faeries
 • Views: 168


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