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"Fear (Introduction)" by Natalie Paquette

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I wrote this very randomly one day, and then as I was scribbling away a story began to form itself in my head. I'm currently working on it (three pages so far - huzzah!), but if I post any of it here, it will only be little snippets, because IF I ever finish it, I'd like to try and get it published. IF is the key word here ... writing in the first person, telling a story and reflecting on it in the 'now' is a very difficult thing to do. And I'm description happy. But I'll do anything for my vampire characters. ^-^
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   Fear has always been to me the most intriguing emotion; were I feeling particularly sentimental I might have chosen love to be my favorite, but I have often seen fear to override even that foolish notion. In a moment of panic, anything is possible. In a moment when your very life is on the line, love is often the last fleeting thought as you either kill or are killed.

   There are a great many levels of fear: anticipation, nervousness, anxiety, panic, the sweat-inducing kind and then... my favorite - the sort that lets everything stand still, in which the world, for just a moment, becomes static and silent, and you are allowed only one thought before it all comes crashing down again and reality slaps you in the face (or stabs you in between the ribs). I'm not talking about a scary-movie kind of fear, where your breath catches in your throat so that your scream becomes delayed, and then dwindles into nervous laughter. Or when you're strapped safely into a roller coaster and you pique just before the longest fall. I am talking about the kind of sickening, gut-wrenching nausea that forms in your belly when you face the eyes of a killer, and know, as the bile rises in your throat, that unless you make the mortal blow first - your very existence will come to a screeching, bloody halt.

   It is this fear I speak of that has both allowed my kind to flourish and to come to near extinction. And in this day and age... it was slowly becoming impossible for us to cover our tracks and keep our faces anonymous. No longer could the lesser of us get away with murder, no longer could we count upon superstitions to keep us safe. Something... had to be done. And in a sickening turn of events, the stupid genius of one myth-mad scientist gave us an opportunity to slip past the veil of anonymity and make our presence known to the world.


The idiot was trying to breed vampires.



←- Dance of the Fae | Fear - Chapter 1 -→

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15 Dec 2003:-) Steve Doyle
*first comment dance* *ooops, sorry, I'll clean that up*

This is a good beginning. The last line surprised me. I hope you post more of it.

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "*laughs* I literally just posted the first chapter in my library today. 12 "
16 Feb 200445 Carolyn Anderson
Wow, lovely! You had this great monologue going, really getting the reader into the speaker's head, and then you throw that last line at me and make me crave more... you really must keep writing on this one. *second comment dance*

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "^-^ It's lots of fun, and also very difficult, to write in this style - first-person P.O.V., that is. The story is all there in my head .. it's just a matter of forcing it out onto the computer. And deciding whether or not to omit the more erotic scenes in my head. lol"
5 May 200445 Anonymous
Oh this is absolutely WONDERFUL!!! So well written and worded so nicely - I'm green with NV! LOL

:-) Natalie Paquette replies: "Thank you. 2"
17 Aug 2004:-) James Milligan
Ooh, I know that kind of fear. Not that I wanted to, ever, but I do know it. I remember seeing this from you before - now that I think on it, this is the opening of the story you showed me, isn't it? Have you worked more on this at all? If you haven't, why not? It's good!
26 Oct 2006:-) Liesel Booker
COOL work. Very short, but the length doesn't matter, because the eloquence in the words speaks enough.
16 Feb 2007:-) Hyde
Perfect!
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About 'Fear (Introduction)':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Natalie Paquette
 • Copyright: ©Natalie Paquette. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Vampire, Introduction, Fear
 • Categories: Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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