"akarui with sword" by Stephanie a. j. king

= I'm somewhat drawn to the face, tail and hair, they're very nicely done. Fluffy - that must be why. ^.^ That's one helluva sword Akarui's got there too - and I thought I was being harsh making my Marshall carry round half a ton of gun on his back...Good giddy god it's massive! Looks really good though.

Hmmm….I can't really give any advice on the hips, you've done very well with the pose, I always find that type of pose so difficult. The shading however... The shading is good - could possibly have a bit more contrast to it - but the smudges around the outside of the image look messy. It's a shame because it degrades such a lovely image.

Besides that though, you've done a great job on this! Keep drawing your anthros Steph! They're excellent!

Stephanie a. j. king replies: "thank you and hope youll continue to watch my gallery ^-^ im gonna get some non-anthro up soon. hope you'll like them too!"

I actually like the shading in the background; It keeps the background from being starck by adding texture, yet it doesnt detract from the main focus, the pic. Also helps highlight the clearness of the sword.

O and uh...Go akarui!

Stephanie a. j. king replies: "akarui thanks you jazz. and cant wait for you to come back here!"

Your hips are too small, widen them to as wide as the shoulders for a regular pose, or for uber-sexy do wider than and kinda tilted

Stephanie a. j. king replies: "ooooh ok thanx! ill keep that in mind ^_^"