| Date | Name | Comment | | | 30 Sep 2003 | Kristin J. Langlais | Loading...I havent quite read it all yet, but so far, I'm quite liking it! Im the writer right in front of you, so hopefully you'll stop by and leave a comment or two  Well I'm off to read some more......... | |
| 15 Nov 2003 | Ray/Rei/Rae/Rai | Loading...Heya! I have read some of your stories. Shadow Seer, chapers one to five, actualy. The rest I have saved on my comp for lesurely reading sometime. I must admit, you are very good. Why don't you try writing other stories. I haven't read saccubus yet, but will shortly. You should get some more variety here. Fran r jacobs replies: "thanks i have written other stuff but they aren't elfwood allow able. they are either not exactly fantasy (more urban fantasy, but not sure if elfwood consider them fantasy enough) or too full of sex to be allowed here. but they are on my homepagehttp://members.tripod.com/%7Efaery_queen/story.html" | |
| 26 Nov 2003 | Ray Valen | Loading...I think you are allowed to put in urban fantasy. That is if I have the correct idea of what you mean.
Oh, you may not notice me, I am the on that posted the previous comment. I made it to the library! | |
| 24 Dec 2003 | Ray Valen | Loading...MERRY CHRISTMAS! Enjoy the day and all those to come! *begins to sing as he fades off into the woods to greet everybody else he knows* | |
| 29 Dec 2003 | Erin 'Chaos' Shipton | Loading...When are you going to update the Shadow Seer? Jeez, I've been waiting forever. Fran r jacobs replies: "i am not sure! after my new year party when i have a bit more time, but the next upload may be the last, cos i dont want to put the whole thing up here. but if you do want to read it all, and can help me proof read it, just email me and i will send you huge amounts of it " | |
| 6 Feb 2004 | Erin 'Chaos' Shipton | Loading...Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading that last installment of Shadow seer that you sent me. Projects and stuff...I'll try to get around to it soon. Don't worry, I didn't forget.  Fran r jacobs replies: "the ending has changed now anyway! if you want, and you email me, and tell me where you did get to, i can send you the new and improved ending " | |
| 22 Mar 2004 | Ray Valen | Loading...*blink* Where has everything gone. I promised myself I would finish reading it all someday... Now there is... ...............So little... ...........................left... Fran r jacobs replies: "sorry! had a cleanout. decided i didn't want the world reading so much of it for free, AND half of it had changed anyway. but if you do want to read it, i can email it to you as long as you can tell me what bits suck and what needs work etc." | |
| 25 Jun 2004 | Ray Valen | Loading...Heya, been a while since I was here... Sorry about that. I since Shadow Seer is gone, I have had no real reason to come back. And I rarely read one of those chapters because each one was so long I had to have a good amount of time put aside for one. Now I have to many stories of other people to read, I finnaly got around top making a document with the list. Seven people... This weekend my head will be so full of different plots and characters I will not be able to speak co-herrintly! But seriously, unless you are only working on Shadow Seer, you should put a couple of other short stories up. You're a good writer. But for now, I must visit my bed. It's past midnight and I have to get up at seven tomorrow (That's just wrong, it being a Saterday) to go to a karate training thing, where I will be needing my energy. Ciou, hope to hear from you sometime again. Fran r jacobs replies: "thank you. i have a couple of other stories i will get around to putting up. thing is i worry abotu putting them here in case this is considered publishing and magazines won't take them as they then become reprints." | |
| 25 Jun 2004 | Tali | Loading...My god!!!!! This story is so good (so far, at least, I've only read chapters 1-2)!!!! One things for sure, if you get this published, I'll be one of the first to read it!!! On to the next chapters!!! Fran r jacobs replies: "thank you that;s so nice to hear. esp when suffering from the, no agent wants to read it cos they are too busy or don't think its commerical enough type thing." | |
| 6 Nov 2004 | Ray Valen | Loading...Yeah...
I suppose elfwood is the training area for writers and artists...
Well, that's fine for me. I suck anyway, so if I want to become a writer one day, none of the stuff I'm doing now will be printed then. Unless I redo them... *shrug* What's the odds a certain magazine you're applying to will know anything about it being on elfwood? | |
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