"Demon" by Franziska ´Jerry´ Schlosser

Great character design; you get inspired, but you do your own thing with it; that's the spirit of a true artist, not? But, I got some things to say ^^ Finish this dude for sure; I mean he could use some colors or at least some shading like the "black beast" picture for instance. Then, the eyes don't look scary enough; make him look at our direction; creates a scary atmosphere...use small pupils or perhaps squares. Add some veins in the eyes to finish the evil look. In my opinion, I would finish the tattoos further on his back; it looks so empty now, don't you think? Or perhaps wings? The pose rocks anyway. I like your work a lot. And I hope this advice helps and doesn't annoy ^^ See you girl and keep up the good work ^^

Franziska 'Jerry' Schlosser replies: "I thought of colouring him. But I also thought I would perhaps destroy him. I coloured him with my "iPhotoPlus" computerprogramm, but it´s too bad. I´m going to have Photoshop so you will see this guy coloured! With iPhotoPlus I had his eyes mainly white with some very small black pupils. *yeah, got him to look scary* "