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Marijan Sruk

"Transformed" by Marijan Sruk

SF&F Picture 5 out of 5 by Marijan Sruk
 
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It's a poem of transformatiom from human to beast
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TRANSFORMED

Nature made me what I am,
The wild, the predator, the howler – one of them.
Tamed in human body, my spirit from inside screams,
Hungering for night, freedom, of blood it dreams.

It all began one night, while I was still young,
The demon attacked me, bit me, on my face I felt it's tongue.
One moment I was walking in the park freely,
Next moment I was wounded mortaly.

But death didn't took me, something different did.
It changed me completely, all my sences were suddenly lit.
I can't describe it with words,
But I became the king of the night woods.

My strenght increased ten times, my speed is now limitless.
I am unstoppable, I am fearless.
By day I am one of you; pretending, smiling, working...
But by night my beastly side takes over, that by day is only lurking.

I can't control it, it's stronger than me,
But maybe I don't even want to, it's making me feel free.
Only one more thing to you I have to say,
If you hear growling in the dark – run, I see you as my pray!

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11 Apr 2008:-) Heidi Hecht
Good poem. You misspelled "senses," "strength," and "prey;" otherwise I didn’t see any real problems with it. *First comments dance*

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About 'Transformed':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Marijan Sruk
 • Copyright: ©Marijan Sruk. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Poem, Transformation, Werewolf, Vampire
 • Categories: Lycanthrope, Were-folk, etc, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
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