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"The Attack" by Brandon J. Moore

SF&F Picture 2 out of 2 by Brandon J. Moore

A poem that I wrote really quick. It's about an attack on some town.

The hordes came in
Their drums a-beating
Their sabers drawn
Their heart a-heating

They slaughtered others
Their bloodthirsty cries
Their evil thoughts
Their evil ties

The goblins have come!
Their eyes ablazing
Their ears a-listenting
Their cries a-screeching

The undead have come!
Their eyes glow red
Their swords a-bloodied
Their teeth a shining

They have left
Their victory won
Their job fulfilled
Their murder is done

Date	Name	Comment
8 Jan 2007	Anonymous	Loading... Poems are lame because there to short so just take the time and write a story or summin.
7 Jan 2008	Altharian	Loading... Nice poem. Great structure, and you captured the moment really well. I don't know if hearts can "heat" though haha.