Thank you for your nice comment! Oooh, so you're a writer. I really admire people who can write! Keep up your good work! Virginia Adams replies: "Welkies for the comment, and thankies for commenting here. I wish I was an artist mehself...I might actually join Loth or the Zone if I get a scanner...maybe. ^__^"
10 Sep 2003
Bryn Elizabeth Lepley
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OK... I only read you Angel and Darkness poems. The Angel poem was written well, and used a strange rhythm, but since you kept it consistant it still sounded good. The Lustful Darkness poem had good intent, meaning I just love the story behind the poem, but your stanzas are somewhat... i don't want to sound mean... but wierd?? First they come in like two stanzas of 3 lines, then it goes to stanzas of four lines, and in your 3 line stanzas you have it rhyme word rhyme, and in your 4 line stanzas the ending words go word rhyme word rhyme... kinda strange. If you could fix that up a bit, it would be perfect... Please don't take this message wrong tho! You are a great writer, your work is really kewl. I just thought that's its always nice to give a little bit of critism to people too... since that's what us writers are always asking for! Keep it up! Virginia Adams replies: "Ah, now how do I start, lol. I realize the first three lines are seperated by rhymes when it comes to the rest of it, but I did that intentionally because I couldn't rightly break up the third line. I'm not a master writer yet, but I'll keep your advice in mind when I put up more poetry. Thanks for commenting."
18 Sep 2003
JESSICA
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Hey virginia whats up i love stories there the bomb i like the vamp one. You should write more *lol* bye Virginia Adams replies: "Lol hey! Thanks for stopping by, I thought you forgot bout meh. Lol, ttyl. ^^;;"
19 Sep 2003
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*blink blink* Ohhhh such lovely stories and poems! *gives Virginia a wolly pop* Keep up the wonderful work ^.^ Virginia Adams replies: "Yay! *taks the wolly pop* Grape, mmm. Lol, I'm glad you like meh work. ^^ Thanks for commenting."
Your writing is a gentile whisper of dreams and mists in the middle of the stormy sea, ghastly wind of inspirations and visions of the 5th empire that will come to be! Please never let it run short, always keep your fountain from dry, but there will be a time we'll need our fantasies to become alive!
I loved your works, especially your poems! You have a great talent there, keep it up ^^ Virginia Adams replies: "Very poetic! Lol, thank you so much for the comment, it made me feel better in my time of late."
We've barely seen anything yet folks! Virginia Adams replies: "Conrad? VG? It's really you? ...Lol, kidding. Hmm, I didn't think you'd actually come, let alone comment. o.O Well thank you. Now you made meh day. ^^;"
Good schtuff! I like your "Angel of Love" the best though. Keep up the good work! Virginia Adams replies: "Thanks, I'll be sure to. *gets writing again* o.O; No more breaks! =^.^="
Hey there, I like your work! (Not much more to say, cause they ordered me to type some new chapters) Love Rian Virginia Adams replies: "Thanks! I checked out your page, but I won't be able to read it yet. </no time> Looks good though. ^-^"
I would just like to thank you for commenting on my poems, and say that I really like the ones you have crafted. If you would like to see some of the ones I can't post here in the woods, feel free to contact me on msn or E-mail. would love to show you what I look at as my best poem so far. Virginia Adams replies: "I added you on MSN. Thanks again for commenting. ^^;"
Hello, nice gallery! Stories.. ahh.. I'll have to read some stories sometime... I don't like to read 'much as I used to, but I'll try and summon up the will to. Oh and you have a pretty cool name, sounds right for some reason.. Virginia Adams replies: "I know how you feel. :/ Thanks for commenting. ^^;"
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