| 26 Sep 2002 | Jackie M. McClary-koch | Loading...I love how this flows. Quite the view on how they think. A very interesting story I hope you do make on a proffesional level. You should enter this at poetry.com see if you could win  it's very good. S. Kocurova replies: "Oooooh! My first comment ever! Yay! And they said something nice! Even more yay! :drags finger from exclamation mark key, does a mad first comment conga all by herself and snuffles over to check out Jackie's page:Thanks for the recommendation...I meant to enter *something* at poetry.com, but not this, I think...I've read many of the winners and they seem to favour a different style (i.e. non-rhyming ;-) and I'm quite traditional with that...so now I'm going to go against my nature and cook up something else...:big smile:" | |
| 3 Nov 2002 | Annalee Flower Horne | Loading...once again, I love it! many people seem to miss the concept that 'evil' people probably don't consider themselves such... this is just lovely. you have quite a gift. | |
| 23 Jun 2003 | William A. Thorn | Loading...Evil? That wasn't evil. If so, then...I am evil! =)~ Seriously, you hit a point much overlooked, as the previous commenter has noted. Evil people don't typically consider themselves evil, which makes them all the more dangerous. I was told, once, that I was devious, and since I was ignorant to that fact, it made me diabolic. I shall have to contemplate that some more after reading this. Otherwise, good work. I don't typically like rhyming poems, but you gotta go what you are comfortable with! =) S. Kocurova replies: "Thanks! teff is much honoured to have a diabolic commenter: Seriously...I never really thought about it consciously, but I suppose that not being aware that what you are doing is wrong does make you more dangerous. Then again, I don't believe that people do things they *really* believe are wrong, so maybe everybody who is 'evil' doesn't really know it. I might be evil! (scary thought) I think I shall have to go away and contemplate some more too... On the subject of Sauron being evil, I think I beat David Brin to something for once. These poems were written mid 2002; his article was in December. So hah! http://www.salon.com/ent/feature/2002/12/17/tolkien_brin/" | |
| 29 May 2005 | Avery Wolf | Loading...I love this! It flows so smoothly! | |
| 29 May 2005 | Rachael Mayo | Loading...The title certainly grabbed my attention, and upon reading it I expected to see something silly - something along the lines of the "100 Things to Remember When I Become an Evil Overlord" list. But lo and behold, I discover fine poetry! I think it's something in your word choice and in your meter that I like particularly, as well as the fact that you're writing from, as you said, the point of view of someone from whom we don't often hear such things. This is great work and enjoyable to read. I'm glad you were our featured author/poet of the day! | |
| 13 Jun 2005 | Jessica Warner | Loading...This Dark Lord isn't just a stock fantasy character! He (or she I suppose)is suddenly a much deeper individual, with an actual personality now! This is really good stuff, nice and deep!
Also - it rhymes!!!! | |