SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by Dragomir Cristian Madalin

ok... so i am now in writer’s cue to 1 small story and 2 chapters of a novel god knows when they will be put one anyway

if whoever reads these 3 stories i’m obliged to tell that even though ’Merried with a Vampire’ is more like a parody of the original, the writing style and well the lots of grammar mistakes in it are just a show of my first tries into writing a hole story in English and not to mention the fact that they are proof of my evolution you can call them a start point .
On the other hand the other story named ’The Soul Mate of a Demon Queen’ is more like a present view of how my writing style is the level at which i am right now
Hope you like them

sorry, not big on the whole vampire story thing for the most part, though I do occassionally read one here and there. I have this thing - I start trying to read a story, and if I can’t make myself read the first couple of sentences, I don’t read any more unless I absolutely have to (sorry, couldn’t read your vampire ones please forgive me)
the demon queen story was awesome though. I could see the look on the "servants" face when he started to laugh but was cut short by her piercing eyes. Probably mouth becomes an "o" as the jaw slightly drops, eyes widen a bit as realization dawns that she is not happy with him, and then seeing his brain scramble for recovery that won’t come......lol

Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "Don’t worry about the vampire story ones i’m not mad they are kinda old and more of a parody of the original =))
I’m glad you liked the other one though "

next stories will be the first chapters of "The Ice Princess of Asken’roth"
the picture is in my gallery the full colored one

hey!! at least your ’writings’ link works!

Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "pfff...dang this system :| they won’t let me post links :|"

I do understand the characters are invulnerable, immortal etc. I just don’t find their situations very funny. Generally, if one has to explain something should be funny, it isn’t. Also, I find the visual images, which you enjoy so much, don’t seem to translate from your vision to the written page or possibly from there to the reader. I hope you find other readers. Good luck.

Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "nah i just have to improve my writing style and become a better writer Thanks for the help Lynn "

YAT!!! Me meep mmeeeme meee!! Transilation from happy language: YAY! I like your stories!!!!!!!
Hello! I find your writing reaching deep into my heart, but I also have some tips on the stories.
1. You must not have too many spelling mistakes.
2. Don’t put too many adjectives into one sentence and try not to make it run on for too long. (Unless you’re going for the funny effect)
THere... I really do like your stories, they’re funny!! heheheheheheheh!!! >: )
I finally have my own stories up, can you please read mine and comment on how I could improve them?
Thanx



Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "thanks glad you like them and although i really busy this time of the year i’ll try my best to find some time to look at them though i’m not that great of writer my self i’ll say what i felt "

hey how you’re doing? lett me know when the ice-queen story is up, I can’t wait to read it.,,

Dragomir Cristian Madalin replies: "i’ll put the story in a few days the day after this message i don’t know cause i’ll put around 3 hole chapters and when i write a chapter is kinda the length of "The Soul Mate of the Demon Queen" that means lots of rewriting and lots of correction "